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Off My Face Drunk; the Way to Be by duchessofdrumborg

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Hi Duchess,

Excellent write, as always. These are surely tough times we are living through & trauma often triggers substance use/abuse &/or relapses. Thx for sharing! Jan
Comment Written by HealingMuse on 11-Jul-2020

Saving Humans by lyenochka

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Hi Lyenochka,

I love this!!! Well worthy of a 6er! Very nicely written and so true. I would only suggest you might consider using a plain font as we do have some visually impaired members. Nice work, my friend!
Comment Written by HealingMuse on 09-Jul-2020

Clue by Sally Law

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Hi Sally, This is a great play on words and a super contest entry. Nothing here for me to suggest you consider editing. Nicely done! Good luck in the contest! Jan
Comment Written by HealingMuse on 09-Jul-2020

Bridezilla and the Superglue by Sally Law

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Hahaha! Good ending here! And a great fpash entry. Best of luck to you in the competition. Nothing I can see here to suggest you consider changing. Jan
Comment Written by HealingMuse on 09-Jul-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Love at First Sight by SixFtLion (Suzanna)

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Hahaha! Great flash contest entry. Absolutely love the ending. Not certain squirrels have manes, but no matter. Best of luck in the competition & thanks for the chuckle! Jan
Comment Written by HealingMuse on 09-Jul-2020

Winnetka by Mastery
Chapter 4 of the book The Deceivers

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Hi. Glad to see you are writing another! ???

As always, very well written.

One question for your considerarion:

"He needed to see the look on a killer's face when he knocked on their door and showed his badge."

I am sticking on the word their. It doesn't seem to agree with a singular individual.

Thanks for sharing!

Jan
Comment Written by HealingMuse on 07-Jul-2020

Lost Back In The Day by roof35

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Hi Contest Author,

LOL - great write and a super image you've incorporated into your well-written contest entry. I'm not certain which contest this is for, but it is well written - nothing for me to suggest you consider editing. Best of luck in the competition! :-)
Comment Written by HealingMuse on 06-Jul-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Dishwashing Miracles by Earl Corp

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Hi Earl,

LOL - Good one! Herbert... Very nicely written. Great image you've incorporated into your contest entry. The kid looks absolutely miserable. LOL

Nothing here for e to suggest you consider improving upon. Best of luck to you in the contest! Jan :-)
Comment Written by HealingMuse on 06-Jul-2020

AmaZing Animal - O by sandramitchell
Chapter 15 of the book AmaZing Animals

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Hi Sandra,

Just WOW! I had no idea... I don't live near a beach, so I'm not so up on ocean creatures. Who knew they "drill" into shells? Or that they are poisonous? :-0 This is exceptionally well written, images are great, and the information you provided is superb. I love learning! Thanks for sharing with us! :-)
Comment Written by HealingMuse on 06-Jul-2020

The Pool by Bill Schott

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Nicely done, Bill. Quite a surprise ending. Nothing here in your writing for me to suggest improving upon. Bes of luck to you in the contest! Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written by HealingMuse on 05-Jul-2020


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