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The Miracle of Life by Dolly'sPoems

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Hi Dolly,

As always my friend, your poetry is just absolutely lovely!

Love the artwork you have chosen, too!

Nothing at all here I could even begin to suggest improving upon. ;-)

Thank you for sharing,

Jan
Comment Written by HealingMuse on 12-Dec-2019

Conclusion by Mastery
Chapter 42 of the book Shadows of Sin

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Hi Bob,

WOW! Absolutely terrific ending, although I admit I'm selfishly sad your book is complete. It's been a really terrific read!

Just a couple of questions:

"Jeff eyed Cleve and smirked. "You got some balls, Snoop. You ain't

even a real cop, for Chrissakes."

It appears there is an errant line break above - at least the way it displays on my monitor.

Also, a bit below, did you mean to include an apostrophe in "spread em?"

Thanks for a terrific read, Bob.

Jan :-)
Comment Written by HealingMuse on 23-Apr-2019

The Kool-Aid Knights by Mike Stevens

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Hi Mike,

You sure nailed thos one, my friend. You sure get your message across and your last line wraps it up nicely. Complicit traitors and justice obstructors would work well too. Thanks for sharing. Jan :-)
Comment Written by HealingMuse on 21-Apr-2019

Wedding Day by Dean Kuch

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Hi Dean,

Good grief, what an awful sight that would be. Ha ha! Nice flash write and a great conrest entry, my friend. Nothing to revise. Good luck and thanks for sharing. Jan :-)
Comment Written by HealingMuse on 21-Apr-2019

Unity and Connection by rama devi

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Hi Rama,

Oooooh, I love this poem. You say so much with so few words, my friend. A great contest entry which should fare quiet well. Nothing here for me to suggest you consider improving upon. Your color scheme is terrific for your verse as well. Good luck and thanks for sharing. Jan :-)
Comment Written by HealingMuse on 20-Apr-2019

Damn Tourists! by Phyllis Stewart

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Hi Phyllis,

Ha ha ha!

Um, I think it is clear who rules here, so long as the humans don't have guns. Lol

This is a great picture to write about and you have done so quite cleverly.

Thanks for the chuckle, my friend.

Jan :-)
Comment Written by HealingMuse on 20-Apr-2019

Just A Poem by Maria Jose Garcia

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Hi Maria,

Oooh, I really like your poem, my friend. This is just a delightful read. Not a character out of place. Thanks for a great read. Jan :-)
Comment Written by HealingMuse on 19-Apr-2019

Revelations by Phyllis Stewart
Chapter 32 of the book Repentance

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Hi Phyllis,

WOW! This is fabulous! You, my friend, are a really great and gifted writer. Not a single character out of place that I can see and the sub plots are exceptionally well written. Thanks for a terrific read, my friend. Jan :-)
Comment Written by HealingMuse on 19-Apr-2019

I Am Not Perfect by Diana Charles

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Hi Contest Author,

Are you inferring that it is a flaw to detest redundancy? Gasp! LOL

I am with you on this one. If people can't retain information, they should write it down for future reference.

I don't think you and I are "flawed" in this regard. :-)

Good luck, thanks for sharing and Happy Easter. Jan
Comment Written by HealingMuse on 19-Apr-2019
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Pikesville by Brett Matthew West

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Hi Contest Author

Ha ha ha!) This is a great western story poem and a really good contest entry. Nothing to suggest you revise. Good luck, thanks for sharing, and Happy Easter. Jan :-)
Comment Written by HealingMuse on 19-Apr-2019


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