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Fishing For Serenity by Ideasaregems-Dawn

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Dawn,

I decided to peek for a change. This is an excellent poem about washing away your stress with a bit of fishing. Just hope your dog doesn't dig into something he didn't expect.

Dave
Comment Written by Dave M on 08-Jun-2013

Amber Glows by Gungalo

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Gungalo,

Just decided to peek for a change. This is an excellent poem about a beautiful sunset with an orange glow buttering the sky, then amber.

Dave M
Comment Written by Dave M on 08-Jun-2013

Curious by adewpearl

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Brooke,

Just decided to peek for a change. This is an excellent poem about your curious grandson. Right now, he has all the questions, but the day will come when he has all the answers.

Dave M
Comment Written by Dave M on 08-Jun-2013

Chapter 8, part 2 by barbara.wilkey
Chapter 32 of the book Savannah Love

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Barbara,

Ah, we see the slimy Doctor Walker. I imagine he's called "Dr." because he has a PhD. If that's so, only his colleagues and people who work for him address him as "Dr." Outside their workplace, people with Ph D's generally want to be called Mr. or Ms., so others won't think they're medical doctors.

I enjoyed this read and have one comment:

"Cash's mom gave me a vet's number they used." This is dialogue, but they used the vet, not the number. I'd finish this sentence with "...the number of a vet they used."

Dave
Comment Written by Dave M on 10-Feb-2013

Chapter 8, part 1 by barbara.wilkey
Chapter 31 of the book Savannah Love

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Barbara,

I am going to follow this book. Of course, the five dollar bill is real (I've seen a lot of counterfeit Confederate money in my time), and Nala's attitude seems out of date.
I thoroughly enjoyed this read.

Dave



Comment Written by Dave M on 04-Feb-2013

Green Swords Strikes by James crofoot
Chapter 3 of the book Sheila

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James,

So Sheila's on a mission. I enjoyed this read and have one comment:

"Your smith has already said he cannot make it's [its] like."

Dave
Comment Written by Dave M on 01-Feb-2013

A Kid's Best Pal - Lassie by Ideasaregems-Dawn

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Dawn,

This is an excellent poem about a faithful dog who is apparently the best person in the girl's family. I appreciated this post and found nothing to criticize.

Dave
Comment Written by Dave M on 01-Feb-2013

Nerves by Ideasaregems-Dawn

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Dawn,

This essay is an excellent statement of your belief in psychic abilities. As I've said before, my mother was psychic, so I don't doubt that it exists.

Dave
Comment Written by Dave M on 01-Feb-2013

The Fallen Tree by Robin Gilmor

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Robin,

This short poem expresses a riddle I've heard often. I guess the answer depends on the definition of sound.

Dave
Comment Written by Dave M on 01-Feb-2013

A Solitary Place by Robin Gilmor

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Robin,

This is an excellent poem about a vision on a cold winter's day. I liked how you mentioned the feel of cold wind on your face and found nothing in this poem to criticize.

Dave
Comment Written by Dave M on 01-Feb-2013


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