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Reflections - Chapter 1 by Tootie
Chapter 1 of the book Footprints of Yesterday

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I have been following your work and enjoy reading it. I thought in this chapter, you did very well in giving much detail of the character's past. I thought that there was much narrative rather than showing a scene of the father, his love and his moments of being drunk. I liked your ending, and I assumed the central problem of your novel. I wish you well and look forward to further chapters.
Comment Written by Tpa on 01-Apr-2020

A Hiring -- 1895 by Pantygynt
Chapter 9 of the book The Maid of the Mill

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A wonderful chapter and again as in previous chapters, you make the mill industry very interesting. I like also enjoyed you bringing out more of Sean's character, good luck
Comment Written by Tpa on 29-Mar-2020

Why Do You Believe the Bible ?

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I liked the way you ended the poem. The whole poetry is just, especially in these times. It only fitting that our trust and faith in God can remedy this terrible plight that will bring us peace. I wish you well in the contest.
Comment Written by Tpa on 29-Mar-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Love Saves the Day by Mastery

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Good to see you back in the ballgame. A very enriched poem. I seemed to have taken it that one partner is, but is remembered by their kisses. Of course. it could be my rainy day mood. Wish you the best.
Comment Written by Tpa on 27-Mar-2020

The Warbler by Pantygynt
Chapter 8 of the book The Maid of the Mill

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I thought this chapter showed vivid detail of the mill. I did enjoy the action and showing the conflict that Sean was under. The dialogue was superb in illustrating the accent. Good entertainment.
Comment Written by Tpa on 22-Mar-2020

I Am A Hugger by JLR

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I found your text to be so true. I can understand people being scared and rightly so. We are in the realm of the 'unknown' but to go on a spree of toilet paper is purely berserk. However, this calamity is bringing people together, even Congress. God does work in mysterious ways.
Comment Written by Tpa on 21-Mar-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Is that Mr Eevens? by JudyE

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Indeed, you wrote the topic of the day. I must get ten to twenty a day, Of course, I'm not as brave as you. I just let it ring. My only question, is why did you use that print? Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written by Tpa on 11-Mar-2020

The River Beckons by Pam (respa)

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It sounds that you have a great idea for a novel, and Canada as a backdrop makes it more superb. You have given some vivid details, which I'm sure you will incorporate in your book. I'm looking forward in reading it. GOOD LUCK.

















Comment Written by Tpa on 11-Mar-2020

Covered by Bill Pinder
Chapter 25 of the book Observations

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I'm not sure of the theme of your contest, but I wish you the best. Aging is indeed a difficult period, especially on that final stretch. You covered a lot of apparatuses to stay in shape. The last line was good.
GOOD LUCK
Comment Written by Tpa on 10-Mar-2020

Eric Has More Surprises! by sandramitchell
Chapter 4 of the book Eric's Epic Adventures Bk 4

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This is an excellent read and very interesting for captivating the minds of young ones. I enjoyed your ending because of the new characters that I'm sure will invoke more curiosity for Eric.
Comment Written by Tpa on 10-Mar-2020


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