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A Wondering Question by Gert sherwood

Exceptional
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The art work is great
for the words yes
we do look back
on our lives some good times
some sad times and precious times.
Loved what has been written
as always your poems are very special.
Great to read.

Honeytree
Comment Written by honeytree on 09-Dec-2018

Holding Hands with My Dad by Gert sherwood

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Loved the picture
and the words very much
Our parents are very
special in everyway
Our parents shared their
love to their children
in a very special way.

Honey tree
Comment Written by honeytree on 09-Dec-2018

The Prepositional Phrase by Mustang Patty
Chapter 9 of the book Building the Sentence

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Very interesting to read
also very long , a lot
of effort has been put
in by the writer.
I liked the following words.

"past
I saw you yesterday when we drove past your school.
The post office is just past the police station.
Don't work past your bed-time.
This is difficult. It's past me.
It's nearly ten minutes past five. 5:09 to be precise."

honeytree
Comment Written by honeytree on 09-Dec-2018

A Time for Miracles by Mustang Patty
Chapter 3 of the book Christmas Stories & Poems

Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I really liked what
you wrote and great
to read as well.
"Christmas is a time for miracles for sure."
Family and friends at Christmas time is special.

Honey tree
Comment Written by honeytree on 09-Dec-2018

Los Angeles to San Luis Obispo by Joan E.

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The colors the picture
the words written
are really great in every way.
The peaceful coast is beautiful

Honey tree
Comment Written by honeytree on 24-Nov-2018

Cold and Heartless Tree by Gert sherwood

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Loved the art work
very much for these words
I particularly liked the following
words
"To take away a mournful woe
to make happiness flow.."

Honeytree
Comment Written by honeytree on 24-Nov-2018

A Thanksgiving Toast and Prayer by Gert sherwood

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Thanksgiving
is a wonderful word
It is a special time
when thanksgiving
is around.
We all thank God for many things.

Wonderful to read.

Honeytree
Comment Written by honeytree on 24-Nov-2018

A Poem to Stan by Gert sherwood
Chapter 6 of the book Love will always Stay

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Wonderful words to read
and the art work as well
Love will always stay with
a loved one who is so precious.
Love will always stay within us all.

Honeytree
Comment Written by honeytree on 24-Nov-2018

The Country Squire Cafe by Mustang Patty

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Interesting to read and written well
I liked the following words.
"It was time. In fact, it was past time. Gary decided to get clean. The other day he saw a sign at the local shelter about a program. He could do it. No doubt, it would be hard. He hated pain and needles, but he hated disappointing his mother even more."
Great writing.

Honey tree
Comment Written by honeytree on 20-Nov-2018

The Objective Complement by Mustang Patty
Chapter 7 of the book Building the Sentence

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I really liked what
you wrote very much
indeed.

Particularly loved the following."While this lesson is very short, you can see how important these objective complements can be to your sentences. When the verb needs additional clarification, you will use these words to complete the meaning. "

Honey tree
Comment Written by honeytree on 20-Nov-2018


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