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Party at a Funeral by SaraSoda

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kind of a sad, but true reality ... I am not one of those who wishes to "see" my own funeral ... but hope it is a good party anywaz ... excellent pen. Good luck! Lea
Comment Written by HalfHoff on 21-May-2012

A Sticky Tape Marriage by Wendyanne

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HEY! CONGRATS to YOU for the really superb kick-em-to-the curb pen. Takes guts, but obviously you got em. Touchy subject - but very classy in your write. I use Angelheart as often as possible ... she is awesome ... so are you. Lea
Comment Written by HalfHoff on 21-May-2012

Songs Of Spring by pnkglo

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very pretty - visually and poetically ... even without any accompaniment, although, I think you might gain by enhancing it with either and/or color and artwork. Great! Lea
Comment Written by HalfHoff on 21-May-2012

Relevant by ennahanid

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Hey, this growing old thingie ain't for sissys is it? A real in-your-face-just-you-wait-and-see-you're-day-is-coming write. I LOVED your author's comments .... THANKS! Lea
Comment Written by HalfHoff on 21-May-2012

Freedom Is Our Right To Exist by squid152

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well, jeepers, you certainly know how to make the most of your alloted time on the soap box! Really passionate, direct and formidable. If we ever gotta choose up sides, can I be on yours? Lea
Comment Written by HalfHoff on 21-May-2012

Mirror by averagejoe1981

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great 5 - 7 - 5 entry. Really visual writing.

line three should be

he and I are ... me

(only 3 ... between)

Best of luck in the contest! Lea
Comment Written by HalfHoff on 20-May-2012

Show us your X by Jean Lutz

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I am so intrigued by this contest and its infinite possibilities ... not to mention the wonderful trip down memory lane. Ya done good, real good. Best wishes in the voting booth! Lea
Comment Written by HalfHoff on 20-May-2012

Whispers of Thunder by yonashalom

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oh wow and oh BIG WOW. I really don't know what words to write you that could ever compare to this credo. Your faith is undeniable and your talent to express and extend it is enviable. Lea
Comment Written by HalfHoff on 20-May-2012

Quotable Quotes by mumsyone

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This is really a unique and welcome change of pace contest idea. Your entry is the only I have read, but doubt I need to read any others. Outstanding. LOVED the finale .... Lea
Comment Written by HalfHoff on 20-May-2012

Quotable Quotes by mumsyone

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This is really a unique and welcome change of pace contest idea. Your entry is the only I have read, but doubt I need to read any others. Outstanding. LOVED the finale .... Lea
Comment Written by HalfHoff on 20-May-2012


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