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For Him by LyndaS

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Unbelievable. How on earth this poem doesn't have a six on it is beyond words. I'll gladly give you my first six of the week, author. Fantastic presentation, full of artistic expertise. Best of luck in the booth. Great work.

DS
Comment Written by DragonSkulls on 23-Mar-2020
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FanStory Contest Rules by MamaBebop

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Thank you! I was thinking about entering with the same thing. People can't seem to read the simplest of rules. Then the contest gets held in limbo for days while everyone waits for them to fix something they should have been disqualified for in the first place. On top of that, reviewers don't bother telling them their entry is wrong. I do though. That's ridiculous when the rules are so simple. Best of luck in the contest...if it ever makes it to booth. Lol.
DS
Comment Written by DragonSkulls on 21-Mar-2020
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The Great Unknown by Supe

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I like your little poem but just in case no one else has mentioned it, your 3 lines all need to rhyme. The FS committee will disqualify it if it doesn't adhere to the rules. A quick reread of the rules and you'll see it. Just letting you know so that the contest doesn't get held up from going to booth while your piece gets reedited. Best of luck in the contest.

DS
Comment Written by DragonSkulls on 21-Mar-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Clever Girl by LyndaS

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Hahaha. Thank you for the laugh, author. Finally, someone who rags on stupid people too. Lol. I do a lot of that on here myself. I love the antonym. Great entry. I wish you the best of luck in the booth. Hilarious.

DS
Comment Written by DragonSkulls on 15-Mar-2020

Bear Visits by country ranch writer

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In case no one has told you, 'Bear alert' is only 3 syllables. It need to be 4 for this contest. 2-4-2. You have the other two lines correct but you need one more syllable in line two. Just letting you know because if it isn't corrected before the deadline, you'll get a message from the FS committee saying the same thing and the contest will get held up for another whole day before going to the booth. It's a cute little piece. It's just not adhering to the contest rules of 2-4-2. Best of luck in the contest.

DS
Comment Written by DragonSkulls on 02-Mar-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Her Triumph by LyndaS

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Fuck them. If no one else wants to review it, I will. Let's see if I get a member cent pump or not. I have a whopping 25 percent chance of doing that. Fingers crossed. Weeeeeee. Lol.

Me
Comment Written by DragonSkulls on 22-Feb-2020

Eternity's Embrace by Y. M. Roger

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Excellent little fifteen syllables, Yvette. I can see why it came out the winner. A big congratulations on taking the win. Well deserved. Love the artwork you chose to go with it as well. Great piece, Y.

;)

Ron
Comment Written by DragonSkulls on 16-Feb-2020

I'll Be Right There! by LisaMay

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Hahaha. I don't doubt it one bit. I've been trucking most of my life and I know what kind of chatter goes on on those CB's. Plus, I've been a biker all my life so I know about the getting too hot deal too. Great offering to the contest, author. Love the picture. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.

DS
Comment Written by DragonSkulls on 06-Feb-2020
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Forbidden Fire by LyndaS

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Awesome entry, author. The sad part is that the committee will most likely threaten disqualification because they won't make the connection to fire if they don't read the title or author notes. They're idiotic that way sometimes. I love the killer pic you chose. Belisama looks like one nasty, set your ass on fire, beotch. Haha. Best of luck in the contest with this great entry that so few on here will get. Great piece.

DS
Comment Written by DragonSkulls on 31-Jan-2020
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Disengage by LyndaS

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Wow, what an awesome 1 6 1. Deep meaning in such few words. Plus, the extra internal rhyme. Fantastic entry. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Great piece.

DS
Comment Written by DragonSkulls on 26-Jan-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.


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