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A Flight to Remember by ChuckB

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A riveting piece of writing. I have one question, is it based on fact or is it a superb piece of fiction. The writing is most creditable and highlights your ability. I can offer no suggestion. In my opinion you appear to have all the skills necessary to find success in this writing industry.
Comment Written by bob cullen on 31-Mar-2020

The Secret of the Rosary by Brenda Elizabeth Rose

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I guess this poem takes me back around sixty year. My family used to kneel and say the Rosary most nights. TV came and it assumed control of evening activities.
I love the Faith contained in this poem, especially the final line. I agree with you, devotion to and in Mary is a very wise investment.
Comment Written by bob cullen on 31-Mar-2020

My Name Is Archie Lee by toz666

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Superb. I love the story poem and this is a great example of the ballad. I have no trouble in picturing this and the harshness of the time. I will never believe William Bligh was the only sea captain who abused his crew and drove them to mutiny.
A great, and believable story.
Comment Written by bob cullen on 31-Mar-2020

My Cherry Tree by Dolly'sPoems

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I enjoyed your poem and your story about your cherry tree. Really though both fell into second placed when I read of the tree painter. And she's just ten. Wow, you may have serious talent there.
Comment Written by bob cullen on 31-Mar-2020

Loss Of Words by l.raven

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Loved the image you posted with your poem. It screams Faith and that is precisely what the world is so lacking today. He really does have all the answers. And you're so right, all we have to do is ask.
Comment Written by bob cullen on 31-Mar-2020

National Poetry Month by Martie Zuckerman

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I'm so glad I'm not the only one to skip over detail in my rush to compose for a contest. I'm glad you posted it though as its extremely clever. I wasn't aware that were that many forms of poem.
To me there are only two types of poetry, good and bad. I read the good and I write the bad.
Comment Written by bob cullen on 30-Mar-2020

Blank by Jenna C

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This tells a story that every writer has faced, me many times. I love how this poem flows. You actually make writer's block sound attractive. The rhyme is delightful. Reality though presents another image, it STINKS.
Very clever.
Comment Written by bob cullen on 30-Mar-2020

You're still my child... by royowen

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Every time I read a Roy Owens poem I know it will be quality. This is a beautiful poem written by one very proud Dad. The rhyme is smooth and the flow is delightful
Comment Written by bob cullen on 20-Mar-2020

Clarity Needs Honesty by easyeverett

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Easy, this is easily the best poem I've read on the site in some time. The message is one that MUST be listened too. The world is going through a very difficult time and we MUST keep our heads. Time will bring recovery.
As always with your work the rhyme is magnificent. Like I said at the beginning. A great poem.
Comment Written by bob cullen on 20-Mar-2020

Between These Pages by Mrs. KT

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I can't help but wonder how you reacted the day you discovered the treasures contained in this book. And I imagine that elation resurfaces every time you read the letters that were written almost eighty years ago. Have you thought about donating them to a military museum. It really represents a great piece of British history.
Your poem here is exceptional. The rhyme and meter gave it a great flow. While the story itself is this post's hero.
Comment Written by bob cullen on 09-Mar-2020


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