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Peace of mind by Joanne Gill

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It was great to read your post. In a world that is full of turmoil for one reason or another at the moment, it was lovely to read this, it gave peace and comfort. Beautiful
Comment Written by Beejay on 25-Aug-2021

Little Brother by Mary Shifman

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This is a lovely poem about your little brother, and it's good to hear you re still close to one another all these years later.So good to hear about siblings love for one another, so often, nowadays one hears of sibling rivalry and family feuds.
Comment Written by Beejay on 25-Aug-2021
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Come Back to Me by Eunice Amero

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Oh dear I can feel the urgency in this post. Your emotions run throughout your words, I feel your pain....however, if he broke your heart into pieces and all his promises were lies, do you really want him back, is he really worth it?
Comment Written by Beejay on 25-Aug-2021
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Damn The Midday Sun by PoeticXscape

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This sort of poem makes a refreshing change, easy to read and understand, yet very cleverly created. Autumn is nearly upon us, so I'm sure your friend, Jack Frost will be with us soon.
Comment Written by Beejay on 25-Aug-2021

Chariots on Duty by Spangle

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Hi Spangle , I found your post very interesting, uplifting and informative. The notes at the end supported your words and enlightened me on many facts I wasn't aware of.
I thought your presentation and choice of colours and artwork complemented really well.
Comment Written by Beejay on 25-Aug-2021

Tortoises, eating meat by LittleIrishman

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I found your account concerning tortoises, extremely interesting and informative, thank you. In the 1950's we owned a tortoise, we fed it lettuce and tomatoes, which it enjoyed. It lived well into the 1980's.
Comment Written by Beejay on 25-Aug-2021

Tales of Whales by mermaids

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I really like your presentation, the way you have the prose and the poetry together, it's a clever, crafted piece of work. I must admit, I have never been lucky enough to see a whale, and your whale packed adventures make me envious....maybe one day I'll have the opportunity.
Comment Written by Beejay on 25-Aug-2021

Trying To Catch Dinner by jacquelyn popp

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Yes, you re right it is a cute Poem..how come you haven't posted it before? It was refreshingly easy to read, and the rhyme and flow were spot on..so pleased I reviewed it.
Comment Written by Beejay on 24-Aug-2021

Doom is Lurking in the Wings by Sandra Barlow

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I know it seems like the world is in a turmoil right now it's all so busy and bewildering, but keeping our faith, keeping positive, being there for friends and family, and strangers , when help is needed...we will get through it, love will help us to get through it...
Comment Written by Beejay on 24-Aug-2021

Rocky Roads by mbagby23

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This is a great Free Verse poem, I just think you need to have a quick look through it again and check a few spellings.I enjoyed your style of writing , I found it very honest and expressive.
Comment Written by Beejay on 24-Aug-2021


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