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Rabbit Ears by judiverse

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These words brought a smile to my face. I remember in the fifties, my brother and I thought it was a great privilege to be the one to switch the t.v. on. We would often fight over who was going to do it. Then wait 5 minutes or so for the t.v. to warm up!
Comment Written by Beejay on 24-Jul-2022
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The Flower of Hope by elainec4

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A beautifully presented 3 lined piece of poetry. Your words/ work demonstrate to me great authenticity, very unique and refreshing. ,simple yet so appealing.
Comment Written by Beejay on 24-Jul-2022
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Dainas Inspired by Proverbs by Katherine M. (k-11)

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Thank you so much for the notes that I found interesting and informative. I have to admit I had never heard of a The Diana.I especially enjoyed the second Latvian proverb interesting. Thank you.
Comment Written by Beejay on 24-Jul-2022

Fear Not by mrsmajor

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What a beautiful sonnet, wonderfully crafted and presented. You're truly an inspiration to others to create
A piece of work that communicates so readily with me and readers.thank you.
Comment Written by Beejay on 24-Jul-2022

Hippie Heart by Melbelles

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A perfect title, Hippie Heart. Stitched in its seams. Just those few words says it all, it demonstrates a Haiku with emotions. Very well presented, well done.
Comment Written by Beejay on 24-Jul-2022

Non-expendable by Sally Law

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How sad when a child is taken , I find it so hard to comprehend. There are always so many unanswered questions....thoughts, reasoning.
A lovely, sensitive Naani poem.
Comment Written by Beejay on 24-Jul-2022

Wishful Thinking by Carolyn Dooley

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Those four lines instantly bring back so many memories. I totally agree with what you say. I remember we used to switch the television on , then wait five minutes or so for it to warm up...how things have changed.
This was a lovely read.
Comment Written by Beejay on 24-Jul-2022
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

The importance of an umbrella by Robert Edward Watt

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Before actually reading your story, I thought, a bit of a long read at times, but I'm so pleased I did decide to read it.it was a great escapist story from start to finish.
It was serious , witty and humorous , which I think made it an extremely engaging read.
Comment Written by Beejay on 20-Jul-2022

Pearl by Bryan Fredrickson

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I love the style in which you have presented your poetry.
I'm so sorry for your loss, it must be heart wrenching for you. Your Grandmother would be so proud, it's a piece of work treated with great sensitivity .
Comment Written by Beejay on 20-Jul-2022

In The Life of Fireflies by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig

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A delightful idea to follow on from, The Life of a....
Beautifully presented. Thank you for sharing your memories of your childhood in Virginia. I have never had the opportunity to ever see a firefly.
Well done.
Comment Written by Beejay on 20-Jul-2022
Read and reviewed with blinders on.


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