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Time by nancy_e_davis

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Nancy, you did a great job on this lanturne poem for the
contest. Perfect syllable count and it certainly does look
like a lanturne. For sure people don't think about their
time running out.
Comment Written by heyjude on 28-Aug-2017

Divine Intervention by Maria Jose Garcia

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Maria, you did a great job with so few words for this flash
fiction piece for the contest. I like the way you told this.
Very interesting the way you told this and after her
telling me she was an atheist and was surprised herself at
her angel wings.
Comment Written by heyjude on 28-Aug-2017

I Had A Funny Feeling by sandramitchell
Chapter 9 of the book Children's Poem-Stories

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Sandra, I really like this. You did a great job with this for
the picture this challenge. This is a good one for children
or for adults. That's nice to think what the caterpillar would
think when he saw his beautiful new self.
Comment Written by heyjude on 28-Aug-2017

Labor Day by robyn corum

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Robin, thanks for reminding us what Labor day is all about.
I'm thankful I'm retired now, but I had a great work
environment where I was. As you say, we just think about having
a day off and not what it was all about.
Comment Written by heyjude on 28-Aug-2017

Epilogue by MelB
Chapter 56 of the book In The Cellar

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Melissa, I'm glad I looked back on fanstory today. I hardly ever get
on anymore, but thought I'd check. You have done a great job with
this book. I guess I'd like to see the baby live and Patrick would be
a good father and help Sylvia.
Comment Written by heyjude on 07-Jul-2017

When Life Throws a Curve Ball by Teri7

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Teri, very good thoughts for us. We all have those difficult times
in life, but must keep on trusting God that He will see us through.
I hope things are going better for you.
Comment Written by heyjude on 22-Jun-2017

Veronica Talks to James by sandramitchell
Chapter 2 of the book This Time - That Time 2

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Sandra, I am interested to see how you will put this one all
together and all the characters you will have in it. It didn't
take long after she told James for it to start happening. I
know this will be another exciting story.
Comment Written by heyjude on 29-May-2017

The Showdown by MelB
Chapter 55 of the book In The Cellar

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Melissa, you've done such a great job on this story. It is a sad story,
but unfortunately something that happens way too much. Patrick
and his family won't have to come up against Sylvia's father anymore.
It is sad she had such a horrible situation with her father, but good
she found a family who cares about her. Excellent.
Comment Written by heyjude on 22-May-2017

The Powers That Be by sandramitchell
Chapter 1 of the book This Time - That Time 2

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Sandra, I'm excited to read another adventure of Veronicas. I think
you've done a good job on the start. I'm sure you'll think of another
title that will be perfect. I'm excited to see how you'll get all the
characters together and how this is done.
Comment Written by heyjude on 21-May-2017

The Town Meeting by MelB
Chapter 54 of the book In The Cellar

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Melissa, I can hardly wait for the end. I have enjoyed this book. I have been getting on fanstory just to see the ending of your book. I cant.believe it. Just one more chapter.you have done a great job with these characters
Comment Written by heyjude on 09-May-2017


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