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Under Winter's Moonlit Skies by Mrs. KT

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Your words show the importance of nature in our current times, nature takes us to another world far from our problems and stresses. I enjoy walks out in nature and your vivid descriptions of fox and deer remind me of my walks. Excellent free verse form and use of words.
Comment Written by mermaids on 19-Jan-2021

Jesus Never Changes! by Teri7

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Yes, your words remind us that Jesus is always here for us. And God is not a God of confusion. Excellent free verse poem that reminds the reader how important faith is, especially in today's world.
Comment Written by mermaids on 18-Jan-2021

Survivor

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I enjoyed reading this story and there are so many wonderful messages here. Never giving up and focusing on what is important in life. Her story also shows one can over come adversity and more forwards. Being burned is so horrible yet this young lady was able to help others and move forward with her life. Excellent writing and a good story for young readers.
Comment Written by mermaids on 16-Jan-2021
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Evil Squirrels by Lisa Wharton

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Your words capture perfectly the heist in action. There are squirrel proof bird feeders to purchase. In four lines, you well describe the stealing of bird seed and how you feel about it. Excellent use of words.
Comment Written by mermaids on 16-Jan-2021

Best Boy! by sammielwf

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I feel your loss. I still miss my Napoleon and it has been over a year since his passing. Love your little poem that captures how you miss your Nagi Blue. He is a handsome boy. Excellent 5-7-5 form.
Comment Written by mermaids on 16-Jan-2021

Life by kmoss

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WE do all end up in the same condition so why waster life being negative. Excellent poem that takes the reader on the life journey and makes an important point at the end. Words of wisdom here. Excellent poetic form and use of words.
Comment Written by mermaids on 16-Jan-2021

Media Dis-barred, a Limerick by judiverse

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Maybe the energy bar would give him the strength to protect himself. This is a humorous limerick that gives the reader a chuckle and you show how the media makes mistakes.
Comment Written by mermaids on 16-Jan-2021

Simple Rules For Peaceful Life-3 by Seshadri_Sreenivasan

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I like your line about spending time with people from all age groups. I think that enhances our lives. Being in touch with our family and friends is also important and healthy for us. Excellent advice here.
Comment Written by mermaids on 16-Jan-2021

Pillow by Sherry Jackson

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I have two pillows under my head at night. This is the first poem I have read about the pillow. Your vivid use of words well describes how good the pillow feels. Excellent use of rhyming words with the first two lines.
Comment Written by mermaids on 16-Jan-2021

Ghostly Mates by Aussie

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This is a haunting poem that makes me imagine ghosts of veterans marching in all parades throughout the world. I like here how you include the horses as well. Excellent rhyming of words that creates a clear scene of this march and evokes feelings and emotions.
Comment Written by mermaids on 16-Jan-2021


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