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Hardly Bearable by Aussie

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I am saddened by the news that koalas are endangered. Your story is a numerous tale from the koalas point of view. I hope they can be saved. I was unaware they became drunk on the leaves.
Comment Written by mermaids on 26-Oct-2020

The Snow Moon by Gloria ....

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It is early for snow and I think like you, I would choose sandals instead. I like the image of winter boots grinning by the door, as if they are laughing at us. You have created a poem that has a light feel to it and shows an early arrival of winter.
Comment Written by mermaids on 24-Oct-2020

Reality Check by Carmen Ducharme

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I can hear your words as a song, you have a strong steady beat. There is a feeling of sadness in your words, the feeling of love lost is strong. You also have a smooth flow of lines that adds to a musical feel.
Comment Written by mermaids on 24-Oct-2020

9 lives by sophie sullivan

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You have an analogy of human life to the nine lives we think a cat has. In few lines, you say much and your last line is a question which makes your poem unique and creative.
Comment Written by mermaids on 24-Oct-2020

Time for me to Leave Fanstory by Gert sherwood
Chapter 7 of the book Having Fun Revamping Cliches

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I am looking forward to your poem books. "Truth is stranger than fiction" is one of my favorite clichés, probably because it is so true. Best wishes as you put your books together.
Comment Written by mermaids on 23-Oct-2020

Aging by Joanne Gill

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Your words capture a variety of ailments that can happen as we age. I think most of us are gaining weight during this covid crisis. I like your positive thinking at the end of your poem, life can still be a great journey as we become older.
Comment Written by mermaids on 23-Oct-2020

Gift of the Fairy Ring by Y. M. Roger

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I will be on the look out for fairy rings. Love your fantasy poem that takes the reader to another place. I can see the ring of mushrooms as the perfect meeting place for fairies. Your words have a smooth flow with a feel of fantasy that is light. May the fairies fly!
Comment Written by mermaids on 23-Oct-2020

Pale Image by dragonpoet

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I like your theme here, we can see the ghost of what we once were. The pale cardinal behind the red cardinal is a perfect picture that fits your poem. Your three line poem says much and has a unique theme.
Comment Written by mermaids on 23-Oct-2020

Dust by zanya

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It is wonderful to read a poem about a piece of the universe. I am not familiar with the asteroid Bennu and I am sure we will learn from its dust. Excellent little poem that teaches the reader.
Comment Written by mermaids on 23-Oct-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

I Judged a Poetry Contest by emmaysavage

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I find your story fascinating. I never thought about how difficult it would be to judge a poetry contest, especially if many if the poems were good. I like how you arrived at your decision, setting certain standards for the winners.
Comment Written by mermaids on 23-Oct-2020


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