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Back to Bite Me by Elizabeth Emerald

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It is interesting how as humans, we have a tendency to focus on the negative and being positive takes hard work. I grew up in a family of negative thinkers and even those in the family who are successful in life, are not positive thinkers. Your essay gives the reader something to think about.
Comment Written by mermaids on 20-Nov-2020

What is Best Dreams or Reality by Gert sherwood

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I think both dreams and reality are important. You have a smooth flow of words that shows how both of these matter. This is a unique form of poetry that fits many subjects.
Comment Written by mermaids on 20-Nov-2020

Darling Starling by robyn corum

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I receive such a warm feeling from reading your words. Your poetic form is smooth and almost musical. Love the words "darling starling". It adds to the poetic smoothness of your poem. I also like the moving picture.
Comment Written by mermaids on 20-Nov-2020

A bird from the divine by Joanne Gill

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I believe your words. I think my parents are near when I see cardinals. "Visitors from heaven" is a great line, I always see cardinals and other birds in that way. You have created a beautiful poem that evokes warm feelings.
Comment Written by mermaids on 20-Nov-2020

You Cheated. by rhonnie69

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Excellent poem that is relevant to today. It shows what happens when one cheats and consequences come forth. There is emotion and feelings in your words. Excellent poetic form.
Comment Written by mermaids on 20-Nov-2020

The parable of the oxen by whitetower

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In few words, your poem says much. For many, like the oxen, a days work begins at sunrise and ends at sunset. There is a clear image in your words and feelings also come forth. Excellent use of words.
Comment Written by mermaids on 20-Nov-2020

Five-Star Review by judiverse

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You have written a unique and funny poem. "Well done" is probably what the zombie would say. You did well with the five-seven-five form. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written by mermaids on 20-Nov-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

This Virus Refrain by robyn corum

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Your words are encouraging and we do need to relax. Your poem captures all the changes we have had to make, masks, ordering out, cleaning our houses over and over, are all part of our current situation. Your poem is certainly relevant to today.
Comment Written by mermaids on 20-Nov-2020

A Pleasant Afternoon by damommy

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As a birder, I love your poem. It reminds me of when I observe the various birds at our feeder. I like the mention of the different birds and the squirrels. "The garden gnome has naught to say" is a line that adds to the scene you create in your words.
Comment Written by mermaids on 20-Nov-2020

Silver Bells by AnnieDawn

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Excellent acrostic form that captures the essence of the silver bells."Each grand tune that nature yields" is a strong line that shows the impact of the bells,. The reader can almost hear them ringing.
Comment Written by mermaids on 20-Nov-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.


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