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Patrick G Cox

Singin' In the Pain by Dean Kuch

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Hi Dean,

Interesting take on the glitz of the silver screen presentation of 'happy ever after' imagery. As we have learned from the untimely deaths of Robin Williams and others, the illusion frequently hides the pain ...

Patrick
Comment Written by Patrick G Cox on 15-Feb-2016

Chapter Veinticinco, (25) Part Dos by barbara.wilkey
Chapter 83 of the book Texas Dream Catcher

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Hi Barbara,

Flames and meth labs don't mix well ... Okay, this is a new twist to the story which you've gibe people smuggling, drug running and now meth manufacturing.

An impressive boom by the way.

Patrick
Comment Written by Patrick G Cox on 15-Feb-2016

Happy Am I To Write Again by Peter@Poole

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Hi Peter,

I was worried by your absence. I'm glad to see you are back and writing, and I hope you continue. I was in Poole last year in June, but didn't have a contact for you, so missed being able to meet. Perhaps another time.

Patrick
Comment Written by Patrick G Cox on 24-Jan-2016

Cleve's Thanks by Mastery
Chapter 37 of the book Triple Crossed

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Hi Bob,

Nicely rounded out with a 'Post Word' from Cleeve himself. I like the way you've left the door open for him to come back as a Detective once more on the Force.

Who is your publisher?

Patrick
Comment Written by Patrick G Cox on 31-Dec-2015

The Showdown by Mastery
Chapter 35 of the book Triple Crossed

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Hi Bob,

Okay, nice messy ending with Cleeve going down, and Cosgrove getting nailed by Jeebers. It's a fact that a .25 can be even more lethal than a heavier calibre in the right circumstances, but then, as an ex-Marine you'd know that ...

Patrick
Comment Written by Patrick G Cox on 31-Dec-2015

Epilogue For Triple Crossed by Mastery
Chapter 36 of the book Triple Crossed

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Hi Bob,

First, Happy New Year, I hope it brings all the success you deserve.

Neat finale to this story, well done. I missed a lot of it, now I'll have to read back and see how you brought it all off.

Very nicely done.

Patrick
Comment Written by Patrick G Cox on 31-Dec-2015

Chapter Veintitres, (23) Part Tres by barbara.wilkey
Chapter 74 of the book Texas Dream Catcher

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Hi Barbara,

Once again, you cut off on a cliff hanger. Spotted one correction for you:

"He thinks we're a bunch of smugglers! How dare him!" screamed Soni -- which I think needs to read -- "He thinks we're a bunch of smugglers! How dare HE!" screamed Soni

Patrick
Comment Written by Patrick G Cox on 28-Dec-2015

Chapter Veintitres, (23) Part Dos by barbara.wilkey
Chapter 73 of the book Texas Dream Catcher

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Hi Barbara,

A very merry Christmas to you and yours. Very good hook on the end there. I suppose we can hope that Soni will use her head and her heart, and see Littleton's ploy for what it is, an attempt to break the protection she's getting from ICE. The key question is how did Littleton, who is clearly not from the same section, get the copy of those orders.

I shall look forward to the next revelation.

Patrick
Comment Written by Patrick G Cox on 22-Dec-2015

Hunting Honey by Walu Feral
Chapter 20 of the book The Journey Of A Feral

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Hi Feral,

Nice of them to find you some non-stingers and not tell you, still takes quite an effort to face down that sort of fear factor. Especially if you know you're allergic to the sting.

Well done.

Patrick
Comment Written by Patrick G Cox on 20-Dec-2015

Gathering Before the Storm by Mastery
Chapter 34 of the book Triple Crossed

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Hi Bob,

Good chapter and it's nice to see you're getting close to revealing the bad guys on it. I have the strangest feeling you plan a twist to it and Cosgrove won't be in when Cleve calls ...

Patrick
Comment Written by Patrick G Cox on 20-Dec-2015


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