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What The Blind Girl Saw #21 by Sally Law
Chapter 21 of the book What The Blind Girl Saw

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Another good chapter. Good thing Clayborn remembered thst the restaurant had cameras. Again, going to the past helps to understand the story. I'm sorry to be so late in reviewing,but my son is still limiting my time on the IPad because of my eye issue.
Blessings,
Elaine
Comment Written by light on 22-Aug-2019

Sorry by Sasha

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Sasha, I do understand. I'm have eye issues also. I am not reviewing as much. Take the time you need. My son limits the time I spend on the computer or iPad besuse he says that is hard on your eyes.
Still praying for you.
Elaine
Comment Written by light on 22-Aug-2019

Proverbial Warning by C. Gale Burnett

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Gale, perfect description of a fool. I love the way you used the Proverbs. "Better to meet a bear robbed of her cubs than a fool bent on folly." Great contest entry.
Blessings,
Elaine
Comment Written by light on 22-Aug-2019

Pumpkin Fate by Mastery

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No surprise that his was a winner. Your detail and dialogue always amazes me. You paint a realistic picture. I would say that Coley reaped what he sowed.
Elaine
Comment Written by light on 22-Aug-2019

Time off by Sasha

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Sasha, there is always a light at the end of a dark tunnel. Sometimes it takes awhile to see it. I will continue to pray for God's tender mercy and loving kindness for you. Don't worry about reviewing.
Elaine
Comment Written by light on 19-Aug-2019

St. Louis Chapter 11 part 1 by barbara.wilkey
Chapter 27 of the book St Louis

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Holding hands! That's telling. I do hope they find something interesting at the apartment. Still holding my interest. Another great chapter.
Elaine
Comment Written by light on 19-Aug-2019

Utopia is no place by Robert Zimmerman

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Utopia is not socialism, but socialism seems to be everywhere. It's nice to know thst it is really no place. Great deduction, Robert. Really liked this one.
Blessings,
Elaine
Comment Written by light on 16-Aug-2019

My Last Tear by Sally Law

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Fascinating one line poem, with a beautiful picture to match the words of the poem. I am so impressed with this contest entry. It looks like a winner to me.
Blessings,
Elaine
Comment Written by light on 15-Aug-2019

Man Overboard! by Mastery

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Perfect rendition of past and present. Those were the good old days when a sucker would last all day and bubble gum was left of the bedpost for tomorrow because gum was scarce during the war. I loved this. It brought back many memories.
Elaine
Comment Written by light on 13-Aug-2019

What The Blind Girl Saw #20 by Sally Law
Chapter 20 of the book What The Blind Girl Saw

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Going back in time gives us a good reason to accept the revelation that Sally is indeed Andrés niece. However it is a surprise. Good chapter,Sally.
Blessings,
Elaine
Comment Written by light on 12-Aug-2019


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