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Swan Lake by phill doran

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Dear Phill,
Superb, absolutely superb. Unblemished metre sweeps the work along and the rhyming is meticulous. The whole thing is so easy to read and tells a vivid story of magic.
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Comment Written by rhymelord on 23-Aug-2020

The Definition of Irony by kiwisteveh

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Steve,
Surely, you jest. Not even the greatest idiot in the western world could say that, but then - maybe the greatest idiot of all time - he's hard to keep up with.
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Comment Written by rhymelord on 10-Aug-2020

January Sun by Janice Canerdy

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Dear Janice,
Well worth a SIX, but all out I'm afraid. I totally agree. The sun in winter is so much more satisfying than the burn summer.
Regards
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Comment Written by rhymelord on 31-Jul-2020

Then He Saw Her by Janice Canerdy

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Dear Janice,
Beautifully balanced poem in form and execution - and what a resoundingly true conclusion -
"He said adieu
to single ways
and carefree days."
- another good man bites the dust.
Regards
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Comment Written by rhymelord on 31-Jul-2020

Katydid by Dolly'sPoems

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Dear Dolly,
Another clever little poem from your biologists pen. May I suggest, however, the following little grammatical change:-
"antennae here are far too long!"
or
"antenna() here is far too long!
Best regards
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Comment Written by rhymelord on 31-Jul-2020

Toxic Tongues by Dolly'sPoems

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Dear Dolly,
wow! A brilliantly executed work - easy to read - flows like honey, but I do hope it is not intended to be autobiographical.
Best regards
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Comment Written by rhymelord on 31-Jul-2020

The Road Most Taken by jaybird1

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Dear Jay,
Great execution of the format and a story that is oh so valid to us oldies. My wife and I are the "last men standing" of our group of friends. We walked a great road through life with them and at least we now have the memories - so important to cling to those.
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Comment Written by rhymelord on 31-Jul-2020

Prissy's Song for Murat by Ideasaregems-Dawn
Chapter 64 of the book Prissy's Corner

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Dear Dawn,It's 3.00 am and I could not sleep, so, naturally, I turned to my computer and Fanstory, to find this GEM.
Execution - Perfect.
Human interest - Superb.
Feline view - about time.
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Comment Written by rhymelord on 31-Jul-2020

The Things I Almost Bought by Gloria ....

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Dear Gloria,
A very amusing, and of course beautifully scripted in metre and rhyme, little look at the modern vicissitudes of life with the VIRUS. Deadly though it is, it is also vital we maintain balance and humour in our lives. Well done.
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Comment Written by rhymelord on 31-Jul-2020

Where Roses Grew by MissMerri

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Dear poet,
Beautifully constructed poem with excellent adherence to metre (so important) and strong rhymes. A lovely story with a fine moral makes reading a pleasure.
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Comment Written by rhymelord on 30-Jul-2020


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