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Fourteen Years by Wils

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so sorry for your loss. I love our four legged companions every bit as much as their human counterparts. They don't live long enough. 14 is not young for a dog but it is too young for a friend.
Comment Written by prodigal on 02-Mar-2021

A Letter to Boris Johnson by Dolly'sPoems

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Nobody really had a good plan for the virus and your case seems entirely unfair. it will likely fall on deaf ears as well. Suffering has never been very good at penetrating bureaucracy. Best of luck to you.
Comment Written by prodigal on 02-Mar-2021

Driving Miss Vivian by Mary Vigasin

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kind of a motley crew you have with Eddie and Vivian. The contrast of church clothes and mechanics garb is pretty stark and Vivian seems a bit unaware. Well done on your flash fiction
Comment Written by prodigal on 02-Mar-2021

Illusion of Time by Susan Newell

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I really loved this.

Einstein is said to have said that time exists so everything doesn't happen all at once.

The perception of time and altering it can ease pain for sure. In the same way thinking of space can. How large is the pain? Exactly how large. Solid or not? I think my mind has played with the concept of space in the same way as yours has the concept of time.
Comment Written by prodigal on 02-Mar-2021

Atheist on a Date by .they.deadpoet

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I almost married a Christian fundamentalist prior to my own deconversion. I understand very well the desire to do away with religious symbolism and it's hard to know if it means as much to them as it does to us.
Comment Written by prodigal on 02-Mar-2021

My Bohemian Heart by Blu Rider

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Beautiful and flowing rendition of a love affair. It reminded me of the writing style of Marcel Proust in which the reader isn't given a choice but to be swept up in the story.
Comment Written by prodigal on 02-Mar-2021

To June, With Love by Sally Law

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June should have written a column with all of her sage advice. I found myself smiling and thinking of my own "June", whose name was Darlene, incidentally and she too would have loved your story. Well done- Sam
Comment Written by prodigal on 02-Mar-2021

Pandemic in Paradise

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Lovely. I meditate almost daily. This reminded me of what my mind does in meditation. I calm the mind then worries pop up. Ssshhhh. Don't worry just listen. Got the same vibe from your poem. Great job- Sam
Comment Written by prodigal on 02-Mar-2021
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

The Drawing by Michele Harber

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I remember playing hangman. Good job getting so much in in such a small story. All of your reviews will be larger than your post. Enjoyed the flash fiction. Good job - sam
Comment Written by prodigal on 01-Mar-2021

Travelers by CD Richards

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Not much more inspiring these days than what's going on off planet. Let's hope we kept a little ingenuity here for ourselves as well.

Well done. Sam
Comment Written by prodigal on 28-Feb-2021


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