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Vaccine! by Robert Zimmerman

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I enjoyed this piece Robert. Thought the line " Chinese Stealth" was very funny. I also thought the way you articulated your criticisms of Biden's stupidness through these pandemic months were very astute. Well done.
Comment Written by Justin Chopin on 26-Nov-2020

Prologue - The Lament by K. Olsen
Prologue of the book The Lioness of Shadi

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A great introduction to this work. The imagery you utilized: rivers, being darkened by blood, a sacred land being destroyed into utter desolation, and the bodies of the dead being strewn through the streets reminded me of the book of Lamentations. Well done with this piece.
Comment Written by Justin Chopin on 25-Nov-2020

Thankful... by robyn corum

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Enjoyed the rhythms of this piece Robyn. I thought the way you cataloged all of your warm Thanksgiving memories and presented them in this wonderful poem was amazing. The line about cholesterol was also very funny. Well done.
Comment Written by Justin Chopin on 24-Nov-2020

Old Toons by robyn corum

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Great observations Robyn. A cartoon of Wile E. Coyote blowing up a t.v. would probably be better than most of the reality show garbage that has polluted our stations. It's strange how much technology we think we need to keep ourselves entertained isn't it? Thought your rhymes and your heeds for a simpler times were very effective. Well done.
Comment Written by Justin Chopin on 23-Nov-2020

Out You Go! by robyn corum

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Wasn't, expecting the twist you put in this piece Robyn. The way you worded this witty poem I thought you were going to be speaking to some kind of a parasite of a person who just won't leave you alone, but thankfully it was just those unforgiving scales. Great work with this wonderful poem.
Comment Written by Justin Chopin on 22-Nov-2020

Derision Causes Division by judiverse

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Great job with this report Judi. It's so strange that someone who is probably going to be the next president of our country can call for peace and unity while he and his own party seem to only be promoting violence and stupidity? Thought your facts were very well articulated especially all of the incidents of trite name calling by the Democrats. Well done.
Comment Written by Justin Chopin on 21-Nov-2020

The Voices in the Night by scongrove
Chapter 39 of the book THE CURSE

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This was, a very creative story Scongrove. I was very impressed at how the senses of justice and compassion that you were able to articulate through your werewolf Jenna , especially with the last lines of your tale when she realizes that even though she may be cursed to be a monster, she can still has the choice to do good with the new abilities she has been bestowed. A very compelling story.
Comment Written by Justin Chopin on 20-Nov-2020

A Far Better Rest by Sally Law

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Well, done Sally. I really enjoyed how you were able to describe Heaven as this paradise beyond the veils of mankind, as an everlasting and eternal celestial kingdom where Christ reigns and there is no longer any sorrow , worry, or pains. Great work with this piece.
Comment Written by Justin Chopin on 19-Nov-2020

Are We Stingy with Graciousness by Janice Canerdy

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Very wise words Janice, reminds me of what Jesus said about loving our enemies as we love ourselves. Thought, the question you posed in your piece about whether or not we reject those who don't comfort us was a great question since most of the time we do loathe those who don't see eye to eye with us. Great job with this poem.
Comment Written by Justin Chopin on 18-Nov-2020

Two Sides of Town by blondie560

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Very creative Blondie. Thought the descriptions and the puns you utilized for describing the apartments of heaven and hell were very clever. Great job with this piece keep up the awesome work.
Comment Written by Justin Chopin on 17-Nov-2020


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