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losing a friend by Hareem.S

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I like this poem. It reminds me of the friends I lost within the past years. I think you captured the feelings perfectly. Great rhythm and it's something we can all relate to. Great job!
Comment Written by ByGodsHand1018 on 31-Jan-2012

Love in the air by OakleyMT

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This is very good. The flow of rhyme is natural not forced and I can feel the sadness you feel in this poem. I can feel the tears coming. This is a very moving piece. Well done!
Comment Written by ByGodsHand1018 on 30-Jan-2012

God Desires by reconciled

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I love this. The message is clear and is something I have always believed. It sends the message of God's purpose for us without preaching and in a "to the point" manner. Great job!
Comment Written by ByGodsHand1018 on 30-Jan-2012

Family Chat by rchitwood

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That is hilarious! I love this story. It's funny to see that we, as women, never lose our spunk! Thanks for sharing. It definitely put a smile on my face.
Comment Written by ByGodsHand1018 on 13-Oct-2011

Burnt Skies, Poisoned Seas by snodlander

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I like the flow of conversation between the two characters and how "you" recall the memory so well. Very nicely written.
Comment Written by ByGodsHand1018 on 12-Oct-2011

Garden of Your Soul by Yvon

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This is a beautiful poem. I love the imagery it creates with words that send a peaceful, subtle mood. Very good and best of luck!
Comment Written by ByGodsHand1018 on 07-Oct-2011
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

God's Winter Wonderland by harleyangelbrat

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You have done an exceptional job with your poem. It's sad how we take God's gifts for granted. We should take the time to appreciate what He's given us. Nicely done.
Comment Written by ByGodsHand1018 on 22-Jul-2011
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Be it little or big pain He's there by misscookie
Chapter 45 of the book His Presence Renews My Faith

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This is very good. I love reading poetry and work that expresses the message of how God and Lord Jesus is here for us no matter the circumstances. Thank you for writing this.
Comment Written by ByGodsHand1018 on 12-Jul-2011

Angelic Script by fineks

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This is well written and the imagery is great. I never thought I'd read anything where angel works together with a snake. It's an interesting concept and I think you pulled it off well.
Comment Written by ByGodsHand1018 on 12-Jul-2011

A Silent Dawning by Dawn of Tomorrow
Chapter 2 of the book My Book of Favored Sonnets

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You wrote a beautiful poem and it's nice to be reminded that everyday is a new beginning to set your life right. Good luck in the contest and I hope you win!
Comment Written by ByGodsHand1018 on 12-Jul-2011


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