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Fanstory does not like my one word lines. I had to type this
review several times.
I
love
it!
Love
the
photo
and
love
the
poem
And
you
are
a
poet
Katie

Comment Written by Kathryn Varuzza on 09-Jun-2014

NEVER ASSUME ANTHING by Sasha

Excellent

Hi Sasha,
I had to review this one. I am leaving this site at midnight tonight.
As usual, you make me laugh, and I enjoy your stories so much.
I can just picture those stores and their wares since I have been to Venezuela several times and I know what you are talking about.
Yes, we Americans are very spoiled. Every time I came back from Italy, or Ireland, or Venezuela, I felt like dropping to the ground at JFK airport in NY and kissing it. And then when I got home I'd take a very long hot bath!
Anyway, I'm glad you are getting your washing machine.
Hugs,
Katie

Comment Written by Kathryn Varuzza on 02-May-2013

Sacred Work by words

Exceptional

This work has reached the exceptional level

Hi D,

This is stellar in every way
and
definitely
deserves a 6 star!
Flows well
Wonderful and very true message
Great image too
Perfect title
Yes, child care is the most sacred work of all
Hugs,
Katie

Comment Written by Kathryn Varuzza on 01-May-2013

God Nate Bit a Tibetan Dog by Joan E.

Exceptional

Hi Joan,

This is cool!
I enjoyed it.
Loved the image you chose as well
Loved your author's notes.
palindromes are cool.
I liked your rhymes as well.
Great title too.
It definitely deserves a 6 star!
Hugs,
Katie

Comment Written by Kathryn Varuzza on 01-May-2013

YES, SASHA, THERE IS AN EASTER BUNNY by Sasha

Excellent

Hi Sasha,

Oh, you are blessed to have such wonderful friends.
This will be my last review of your work here on fanstory.
I am wrapping things up today.
I love your descriptions
and
your stories are always so interesting.
I will keep in touch.
Katie

Comment Written by Kathryn Varuzza on 01-May-2013

I Am The Sparkle by sweetwoodjax

Exceptional

Hello,

Oh, this is excellent in every way so I had to give you a 6 star!
Flows very well.
Wonderful love poem.
I love your rhymes
and everything you said
I love the title too
And I love how you end it.
Bravo!
Katie

Comment Written by Kathryn Varuzza on 30-Apr-2013

a fairytale by rjuselius

Excellent

Hello,

I like your poem.
Beautiful artwork.
I like your rhymes
and how your poem sounds
It flows well
and
I like how you ended it.
Thank you for entering my contest, and good luck!
Katie

Comment Written by Kathryn Varuzza on 29-Apr-2013

The Nature of Things. by curious novice

Exceptional

Hello,

I really loved this.
It was stellar in every way so I had to give you a six star.
I love how you placed the words on the page.
Nice artwork and visual presentation.
I love every word but I like how you said how days soak into the past like water into the earth
and
I love how you ended.
Great job!
And thank you for entering my contest and good luck!
Katie

Comment Written by Kathryn Varuzza on 29-Apr-2013

Mister Brown's Bull by Shirley E Kennedy
Chapter 16 of the book Story Poems from My Heart

Exceptional

Oh, I loved it so I had to give you a 6 star!
It made me laugh!
I loved your rhymes
Your little story
and
your moral
Do not mess with the bull!
That is for sure!
Great job.
Katie

Comment Written by Kathryn Varuzza on 28-Apr-2013

State of Nations by Joan E.

Excellent

Hi Joan,

Nice Katie21 poem.
Good title.
Love the image and visual presentation.
I like your last line best
And I like that you always teach me something that I didn't know.
Love your author's notes too.
And I'm glad you entered my contest.
Good luck in the contest.
Hugs,
Katie

Comment Written by Kathryn Varuzza on 27-Apr-2013