My life thus far
Such a sad poem!
Some days are like this when we get in a funk.
Hope the clouds have lifted.
I'm glad you tried my skinny style, though, to be real technical, a true skinny stanza style poem is where there is only one word per line..., though this poem here is pretty skinny...
I liked it even though it was sad.
It flowed well, and you made the reader fell and see the sadness and loneliness.
I like your ending and your ending rhyme.
Comment Written by Kathryn Varuzza on 23-Apr-2013