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Begin Again

Going Home, Act 1,Scene1,Part2 by judiverse
Chapter 2 of the book Home Again

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You write with a very true and down to earth flair. The reader can picture sitting right there listening and believing in the reunion and reminiscing. You can sense a bit of remorse in your characters as they reflect on the past and the future. Well written.
Comment Written by Begin Again on 23-Oct-2020

The Leprechauns Secret by JLR

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Ah the luck of the Irish doesn't seem to apply when those slick little green guys are coming around. Loved the little poem and it certainly was spot on. Cute, clever and an interesting read.
Comment Written by Begin Again on 10-Mar-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Between These Pages by Mrs. KT

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What a wonderful yet deeply emotional discovery hidden within your family's books. Thank you for sharing and it was done so elegantly. Wishing you the best! Have a great day!
Comment Written by Begin Again on 09-Mar-2020

Mother Nature's Not So Nice by Louise Michelle

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A marvelous play with the words and the rhyming was smooth and enjoyed. I so could picture that fickle Mother Nature playing games with our minds and our lives. Well done!
Comment Written by Begin Again on 09-Mar-2020

Hurricane Hazel by Raffaelina Lowcock

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I've been in the area of several tornadoes and violent storms and personally I don't think we can ever be fully prepared for the wrath and destruction Mother Nature doles out to us. You have written well as to what thoughts flash through our minds and how we scramble to survive. Only hoping we will see a tomorrow.
Comment Written by Begin Again on 09-Mar-2020

Trial of love by Sergeant Floyd

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I believe that love is always proven to be real by how it is shown....sharing, caring, touching and doing. Actions are far more truthful than the written word. I love how you showed the effort and willingness to try and prove your love. Well done!
Comment Written by Begin Again on 09-Mar-2020

Men Weep by thaities, Rebecca V.

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Short, powerful and to the point! We teach ourselves and our children to be tough and strong, but often fail to show them that baring your soul and opening your heart is stronger than being tough. Love it! Sniles and hugs!
Comment Written by Begin Again on 09-Mar-2020

Pitfalls Of the Working World by BethShelby
Chapter 18 of the book Remembering Yesterday

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Beth, your life has been so colorful and filled with memories. I am glad that talking to your husband has been good therapy and a wonderful journal to leave your family. Enjoyed the read! Thanks for sharing. Have a great day!
Comment Written by Begin Again on 09-Mar-2020

What Is Love? by dkblack

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Your words are spot on, my friend. I enjoyed seeing how you found love in each and every person that touches our life. The rhyme was easy to read and the words were perfect for each. Loved the poem. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written by Begin Again on 08-Mar-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Jesus Hears Me by pharp

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We all have times in our lives when what we think we need, might not be what we truly need. I am thankful that Jesus does listen and hear us when we call. His light has been my salvation or I never would have made it through these difficult times. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written by Begin Again on 08-Mar-2020


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