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Florrie
Some Hope of Understanding by SHIRLEY LEE

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A good description of the struggle to escape the darkness that surrounds your sister enveloping you. It must be a struggle for you dealing with this problem. florrie
Comment Written by Florrie on 05-Sep-2013
OH Voyageur! by Treischel
Chapter 58 of the book Minnesota Poems

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Wonderful words used in this poem. They do not rhyme but seem to have a melody of their own that is so close to rhyme. I really enjoyed the photo. Good luck in the contest. florrie
Comment Written by Florrie on 05-Sep-2013
Threads by tedanytime

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A very good rendition of woven threads of life. Everyone needs encouragement with words of kindness. The world could be a better place if all followed this writing. florrie
Comment Written by Florrie on 05-Sep-2013
Perfect Lovers to Perfect Strangers by Iese

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A very good poem spattered with rhyme and repetitive rhyming words and imagination which I really enjoyed. Not all poets do this magical trick. Keep up the good work! florrie
Comment Written by Florrie on 05-Sep-2013
Reality Blows! by Mike Stevens

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I like this writing because of the humor included in it. Some days it is difficult to find something new to write about, and I can relate to that. Good job!
Comment Written by Florrie on 05-Sep-2013
My Diet by Patriciacanaries

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A very tempting poem with a spattering of alliteration. Good job writing this. The last line is something perhaps all people can relate to. I especially like the 'chocolate' line, but actually try to eat less fat. florrie
Comment Written by Florrie on 05-Sep-2013
Oh chocolate love of mine by steevie

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This is a great poem, Steevie. I can just taste the elixir from heaven while reading you poem. Now if I can find the one I wrote a couple years ago, I will send it to you. florrie
Comment Written by Florrie on 01-Aug-2013
Skinny-Trippin' by barleygirl

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A well written and rather frightening story of camping and finding the way back. Flip-flops are not a good idea to go hiking or much of anything else. florrie
Comment Written by Florrie on 09-Jul-2013
Action Plan by CR Delport
Chapter 66 of the book The Army Chronicles: Phase Two

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This is a good read which leaves one with a great sense of accomplishment thinking that the awards will be given to those who deserve them. Not every ceremony needs to be elaborate. florrie
Comment Written by Florrie on 09-Jul-2013
Not an Unfortunate Series of Events by hyoung

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This poem conveys good messages. I especially like the word 'respect' when used to teach children. They rhyme is great and I also like the last two lines. florrie
Comment Written by Florrie on 09-Jul-2013
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