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Pennywise by victortouche

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Doug,
Yes this is true. A painting or other kind of art can touch your heart without the need for real words. The way the clown is painted makes him look confused, just like we are by the words.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written by dragonpoet on 14-Aug-2020

A Poetic Panic

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Yes, this witty poem reminds us that most poetry has a lot of rules. But free verse doesn't. And you can choose to write any way you want. Prose has rules too.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet
Comment Written by dragonpoet on 14-Aug-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Reflecting

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This poem uses two meanings for reflect to shows where you choose to go through your memories.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet
Comment Written by dragonpoet on 14-Aug-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

The chain breaking power of love

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This is a wonderful picture and fitting words to match.
Why can't we all stay as accepting as children.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy,
dragonpoet
Comment Written by dragonpoet on 14-Aug-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

From where I Sit! by Mary Hollingsworth

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These few words show us how much we have to sit and think about. The space between them is a metaphor for the time we have to think about it.
Staying where you are may be the smart thing to do at this time.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet
Comment Written by dragonpoet on 14-Aug-2020

Dissociation by Aiona

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Aiona,
This tells of the horrors of discrimination and what it does to the souls and lives of its victiims. It brings in the riots and protests and hopefully what has happened won't die down and change will continue to happen.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written by dragonpoet on 14-Aug-2020

Manolis by S. Haley Berman

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This is a good use of a few words to describe the sights and sounds of a shepherd bringing in his sheep.
Congrats on coming in second in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great weekend
dragonpoet
Comment Written by dragonpoet on 14-Aug-2020

Mutuality in Friendship by Janice Canerdy

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This sounds like a wonderful friend and trustworthy, compassionate person. It shows that friendship needs to be reciprocal to be true. Once you return help you become just as good a friend.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written by dragonpoet on 13-Aug-2020

War Against Ourselves by Gloria ....

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Gloria,
This uses the light of day and the dark of night as metaphors for our good and bad acts. We do wage war on ourselves with discrimination and any other hate. Nicely done Shakespearean sonnet
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written by dragonpoet on 13-Aug-2020

Spiritual Respite

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This nature/religious poem fits the prompt perfectly. This reminds us that we are part of creation and need to be humble.
Good luck with this prompt.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet
Comment Written by dragonpoet on 13-Aug-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.


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