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Time to come back by Sasha

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I too have been away 3-4 years though I pop in to see who posted and if I have any interest in reading them. That answer has mostly been "no".
I lost interest in the whole writing thing but recently I've gotten the "itch" once again.
We'll see... John
Comment Written by jmdg1954 on 16-Nov-2020

Bad Behavior, Bad Consequences by Janice Canerdy

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The only way I write a poem is for it to rhyme. Therefore I'd probably land in jail and the key flushed down the toilet.

Nicely composed with a touch of humor. John
Comment Written by jmdg1954 on 16-Apr-2020

AmaZing Animals - B by sandramitchell
Chapter 2 of the book AmaZing Animals

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Hi Sandra. I've been away from FS for some time and am trying to get back into it again.

If I keep reading your work it will certainly help me get my mojo back again.

I love where you're going with this and of course why you're doing it. I have 5 grandchildren and there is nothing in the world like them.

Keep writing and I'll keep reading . John
Comment Written by jmdg1954 on 15-Apr-2020

Hope The Door Hits You by ExperiencingLiphe

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This read very choppy rather than in a smooth flow of thoughts. You made your point very clear that you have terrible neighbors.

No need for (thinking?!?! ) simply use one question mark.

Happy days when they move are coming, John
Comment Written by jmdg1954 on 10-Mar-2020

Bias... by royowen

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Excellent writing my friend. Bias comes in all shapes and form unfortunately and we see it and live through it daily, countless times.

Many good lines in your poem that resonate.

Nicely composed... John
Comment Written by jmdg1954 on 01-Feb-2020

Oh wondrous Child... by royowen

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Roy, what a great read as I'm sitting having lunch. Tremendous poem for this Christmas season with a great rhyme and patter.

Thank you for sharing . John
Comment Written by jmdg1954 on 26-Dec-2019

Saying Goodbye to Grandma by Bobby Jo

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It is extremely difficult to lose someone so close when you're so young. You told this beautifully, in a heart felt style.

We've all lost close family and deal with it in our own ways.

Nicely written. John
Comment Written by jmdg1954 on 14-Dec-2019

Spreading Smiles by sandramitchell
Chapter 2 of the book A Book of Rhyming Poems

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Hi Sandra.

Countless times during the day I tell someone, "come on, bro, it can't be that bad, smile."

Smiles bring cheer and laughter and happiness and joy to surround you.

Smile and be happy. It can only make the world a better place.

Good reading, John
Comment Written by jmdg1954 on 05-Dec-2019

Rain, Rain Go Away by Sasha

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I wasn't aware you would have that amount of rain.

I would cherish a day of being kept prisoner inside because of the weather and do absolutely nothing, nada ... zero!

Nicely composed. John
Comment Written by jmdg1954 on 03-Dec-2019

Heavy Metal? by Roxanna Andrews

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Rox... Nothing wrong with enjoying what you like and no one else should question it.

Me, I'm kind of strange. I'm all over the place with the Dobbie Brothers, Zeppelin, Elvis, Billy Joel, Neil Diamond to name a few.

Talk about weird...
by the way, great poem and story. John
Comment Written by jmdg1954 on 16-Nov-2019


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