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So You Understand? by T.A. Walk

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Hello Mr. T. A. Walk,

I'm, well, different.
And so are you.

Your poem is a truthful
wash of face, and actually
humbles me in place.

Outstanding.

I'm very impressed.
Oh, that means you
should be impressed too,
because sometimes I forget
just how wonderful I am.

Uh huh.
It's been a while on here,
(FS), since I've read such beautiful, brutal honesty.

I've had several Vietnam vets break
eventually, and their story comes
pouring out. PTSD is VERY real.

I am extremely proud of your
resoluteness to-survive, honor, feel,
be.

If you have time, perhaps you would
enjoy my non-fictional story called,
"The Walk."

Mr. The Actual Walk.

Superb.

PS Not trying to be a pain, two very minor spags.
1-"lunch and dinner too(,) if (it's) keen"
I prefer leaving "it's" out.

2-No(,) far from it(,) in fact.
Comment Written by victortouche on 24-Feb-2021

A Father's Pledge by Mastery

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Beautiful, Bob.

I really have nothing else to say.
But, I must for our dear editorial,
er, dictatorial? software staff's
continuous perusal.

Oh my, how nice that us lower
irritants are observed and controlled, eh?

I suppose McDonald's wouldn't even let
me count change out.

humm dee dee humm dinger
and so on blah blah blah.

Let's try it,

Doug
Comment Written by victortouche on 28-Jan-2021

Taps by Mastery

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Couldn't resist this Bob.
I'm quite certain the
sentiments expressed here
are true.

Sad...but true.

Good job,

Doug

okee dokee then,
I must preamble on for 150 characters.
Uh huh. I don't think have of the reviews
I receive have such.

Hey, let's try this again.
Comment Written by victortouche on 28-Jan-2021

One Napkin Away by Mrs. KT

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This is one of the best things
I have EVER read. I am nothing
short of astounded.

This is better than I can write.
I mean this as a compliment,
tho it might sound a bit
arrogant.

I LOVE this.

What a great job,

Doug
Comment Written by victortouche on 28-Jan-2021

Flight (A Daughter's Tale) by RGstar

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Jesus H. Christ

Just my way of remanding
to language that which
astounds me.

This is more than quite good.
Your sentences are of themselves.

Yes, they continue the story,
but live unto themselves as well.

Very different composition from
what I am capable of. Yet so
intellectually vibrant.

I, actually, had to try.
Concentrate. Dwell. Cogitate.

Yet this swells as a whole.

I am very impressed good sir.

Well done,

Doug
Comment Written by victortouche on 14-Jan-2021

Mo's Surprise by Mastery
Chapter 28 of the book The Deceivers

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I don't know why I read you.
You're exceptional.
Every time for f...'s sake.

Although, being a dentist,
I (smiling) resent the
root canal implication.

Still...I should read one of your
novels, entirely.

Doug
Comment Written by victortouche on 03-Jan-2021

Data on Dates by Susan Larson

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Amen, sister.

If you think I'm
going to argue with
Galileo...

Well then U should
conclude I'm a
narcissist.

Smiling,

Doug
Comment Written by victortouche on 03-Jan-2021

Crystalline Lace Morns by Mrs. KT

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Hello Diane.
Beautiful.

I especially liked
these lines. I added one
very small alteration.

Lol. It never works when I alter,
but I can't help myself. In addition,
I think you explained the poem to be
in a specified syllable count?

Anyway, the poem was great.

Here goes-

...dancers scattered.
In time, (they) return;
bright green dresses, not tattered.

Merry Christmas,

Doug
Comment Written by victortouche on 13-Dec-2020

A Thousand Paces by tfawcus

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Beautiful my friend.
Very reflective.
Intimate and warm,
Actually.

I liked it.

Doug

Jesus H Christ-
I have to ramble on a bit
for Fanstory's Nazi app.

Merry Christmas

And

Sieg Heil
Comment Written by victortouche on 12-Dec-2020

Time Is Passing by nomi338

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Hello my friend.
Succinctly wrapped up.
We have talked before
about life, things, and
so forth.

Appropriate content
and timing.

Let's start again in
2021. All of us.

Doug
Comment Written by victortouche on 12-Dec-2020


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