So You Understand?
by T.A. Walk
Hello Mr. T. A. Walk,
I'm, well, different.
And so are you.
Your poem is a truthful
wash of face, and actually
humbles me in place.
I'm very impressed.
Oh, that means you
should be impressed too,
because sometimes I forget
just how wonderful I am.
It's been a while on here,
(FS), since I've read such beautiful, brutal honesty.
I've had several Vietnam vets break
eventually, and their story comes
pouring out. PTSD is VERY real.
I am extremely proud of your
resoluteness to-survive, honor, feel,
If you have time, perhaps you would
enjoy my non-fictional story called,
Mr. The Actual Walk.
PS Not trying to be a pain, two very minor spags.
1-"lunch and dinner too(,) if (it's) keen"
I prefer leaving "it's" out.
2-No(,) far from it(,) in fact.
Comment Written by victortouche on 24-Feb-2021