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Sonnet of Music by Pam (respa)

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What a great and well written Shakespearean sonnet you have penned here. It flows smoothly, like sonnets should, and has a good solid rhyme. I thoroughly enjoyed this, and thank you for sharing it with us. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
Comment Written by fionageorge on 20-Mar-2017
Morning Lake by MissMerri

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Merri, this is just a beautiful and powerful poem, and one which can bring great solace to those who suffer from loneliness. Great quatrains, with solid and easy flowing abcb rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing and warmest regards, Marijke :o) xxx
Comment Written by fionageorge on 20-Mar-2017
Deep Within the Misty Wood by WalkerMan

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I have always loved this song, especially Elvis' version. And your interpretation and dedication to this song is just as powerful and beautifully written. Great quatrains, with solid rhythm and rhyme schematic. Just beautiful. Thanks for sharing and warmest regards, Marijke :o) xxxx
Comment Written by fionageorge on 20-Mar-2017
Find Positives by melyuki

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Hi Mel... great poem, and yes, I did read about the terrible weather up your way. What a great poem of couplets, so descriptive and perfect rhythm and rhyming scheme. I hope you are well. Afraid I have been AWOL for quite some time... can't seem to get motivated to write. Hopefully soon. Take care ... miles and miles of sunny smiles from a warm and dry Tassie. xxxx Marijke :o)
Comment Written by fionageorge on 20-Mar-2017
Labyrinth by Dutchie

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Wow, wow, wow! What a deep and meaningful, emotional Free Verse Poem you have created here my dear friend. Good luck in the contest... I think you deserve to win this. Congratulations and best wishes... Marijke :o) xxxx miles and miles of friendship smiles...
Comment Written by fionageorge on 20-Mar-2017
Different by Dutchie

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Wow, Fietje. What a wonderful poem, so full of wise advice. I just popped into FS for the first time in months, and found this gem of poem. Every child should have this advice. Great quatrains, excellent grammar and rhyme. Wow again. Just beautiful. Your English and your understanding of a second language always amazes me. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem, it has made my day. Warmest regards and loads of loving smiles across the miles... Marijke xxxx :o}
Comment Written by fionageorge on 08-Feb-2017
Playhouse by reconciled
Chapter 14 of the book To Last Forever

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I thoroughly enjoyed this delightful little journey in that lovely story of playing house, with cat and mouse. Great video clip is so delightful, but your well chosen and well structured words stand on their own. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
Comment Written by fionageorge on 24-Sep-2016
The Storms Of Sundown by Realist101

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A very interesting and well written Paranormal Flash Fiction, which meet all the requirements of a Flash Fiction. Good beginning, interesting story line, and a wonderful and imaginative ending. Good luck in the contest and warmest regards, Marijke :o)
Comment Written by fionageorge on 24-Sep-2016
His Eyes tells It All by misscookie

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The photo goes beautifully with this different, but very emotive, love poem. I too, have an autistic grandchild, I too, see the love in his confused eyes. We are there to support them. Good luck in the contest, Cookie, and warmest regards, Marijke :o)
Comment Written by fionageorge on 24-Sep-2016
Love is in the Face by CALLAHANMR

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Ah, my friend, you too can express such love and emotion with so few words, my friend. What a lovely and loving way to say 'I love you'.to your beautiful lady. Good luck in the contest and warmest regards, Marijke :o)
Comment Written by fionageorge on 24-Sep-2016
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