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Circle of Sight by MissMerri
Chapter 6 of the book Love Lights

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Happy Saturday, Adonna,

I was pleased to find your poem's notice in my inbox this morning. Your poem is gorgeous, a perfect poem of faith. The sentiment expressed in the poem through your lovely phrasing is perfect. The trochaic meter is spot-on and effective in delivering your message. I like the ABCB rhyme pattern. A beautiful poem and a terrific new addition to your new book.

Well penned, my friend.
-Ray
Comment Written by mountainwriter49 on 21-Sep-2019

spring by Jmf4119

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Hi Janet

What a lovely haiku suite. You've captured spring so aptly in these well penned haiku. They are succinct and create wonderful visuals for the reader.

Well done, my friend.
Ray
Comment Written by mountainwriter49 on 01-May-2019

In the Presence of Sunshine by judiverse
Chapter 11 of the book Remembering Brooke (adewpearl)

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Hello Poet

I enjoyed reading your tribute for Brooke. Your heart-felt words resonate with me, and I am sure so many others too.

I particularly loved the following. phrasing. I think it sums up Brooke so beautifully.

Across golden fields
you spread eternal sunshine
shimmering in verse

-Ray
Comment Written by mountainwriter49 on 19-Mar-2019

I Will Not Mourn by robyn corum
Chapter 10 of the book Remembering Brooke (adewpearl)

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Hi Robyn,

What a beautiful tribute you've penned for Brooke. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. And indeed, she wouldn't want you or any of us to cry or morn. But she would appreciate us remembering her, and reading her poetry.

Well. done, my friend.

Ray
Comment Written by mountainwriter49 on 19-Mar-2019

The Golden Ratio by Gloria ....
Chapter 25 of the book Remembering Brooke (adewpearl)

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Good Afternoon, Gloria,

I am awed by your tribute to Brooke. Simply awed. You've well captured Brooke, her poetry and her contributions to literature, poetry and to so many of us who knew and loved her as friend, mentor, poet, etc.

I hope her family will authorize a multi-volume collection of her poetry. Her voice is one that should live on for centuries. Somehow, Gloria, your words just brings that to the surface,

So well written and presented, my friend.

-Ray
Comment Written by mountainwriter49 on 19-Mar-2019

A Tribute by Ulla
Chapter 9 of the book Remembering Brooke (adewpearl)

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Hi Ulla,

Thanks for your warm thoughts. The beautiful thing about Brooke and her poetry is that she will still be with us. Thanks to her having her poetry placed under eternal flame, you can now read it at your leisure and come to love it as so many of us do.

Thanks for sharing.

Ray
Comment Written by mountainwriter49 on 19-Mar-2019

On the Wind by Bill Schott
Chapter 8 of the book Remembering Brooke (adewpearl)

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HI Bill

I enjoyed your short poem. It says a great deal in so few words. Yes, we have all paused for reflection and remembrance. She was a great lady and a resplendent poet.

thanks for sharing.

Ray
Comment Written by mountainwriter49 on 19-Mar-2019

Good-bye Brooke by Mastery
Chapter 7 of the book Remembering Brooke (adewpearl)

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Hi Bob,

It's good to read your heart-felt words for Brooke. This is beautifully written. I particularly like the following:

Any writer/reader could not help but be drawn in by Brooke's wonderful, and always meaningful writing. To this day, I have not seen a talent for writing poetry in our modern day, as well as Brooke Baldwin.

Bob, those few lines just say it all, and say it so very well.

I hope you're doing well.
-Ray
Comment Written by mountainwriter49 on 19-Mar-2019

A Dear and Talented Friend by Sasha
Chapter 6 of the book Remembering Brooke (adewpearl)

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HI Sasha,

Thank you for sharing this beautiful tribute for Brooke. Not only was she the top poet for many years, I would submit that she IS the top poet of FanStory. I cannot imagine anyone coming closing to replacing her.

I enjoyed your heart-felt words.

-Ray
Comment Written by mountainwriter49 on 19-Mar-2019

Keeping All The Memories by ExperiencingLiphe
Chapter 5 of the book Remembering Brooke (adewpearl)

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Good Afternoon, Poet,

I enjoyed reading your tribute for Brooke. Your words sum up so much of how many of us feel. I particularly liked your last two lines.

Yes, we gained an angel today,
while keeping all the memories.

Thanks for sharing.

Ray
Comment Written by mountainwriter49 on 19-Mar-2019


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