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Mask by 24chas

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Good use of a short skinny poem form to be brutally honest. I like the shifts from external mask to inner emotion to the slightly humorous acknowledgement that we all die. Enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written by sfharper on 02-Apr-2019

Broken Pieces Of My Heart by patcelaw

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What a wonderful poem about the healing power of faith and love. If personal, I'm glad to see such a recovery from a broken heart for you, but if not, it still works and is so kind. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written by sfharper on 02-Apr-2019

New Territory: New Green Land-Part 1 by Ross E Silke

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Wow, amazing poem. The continual call to "look up" offers inspiration and connection to many elements of nature. It allows one to feel awe and look around and enjoy. It is a truly good season. Enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written by sfharper on 02-Apr-2019

Come, Stargaze With Me by Jannypan (Jan)

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What a beautiful sonnet of faith and about love of a wonderful nature. Good use of rhyme and form. It seems really happy and in a wonderful place. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written by sfharper on 02-Apr-2019

The Spider and the Bee by Dolly'sPoems

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Aw, the terrible struggle for food in nature is well depicted. But you left us with hope for both the bee and the spider, although the fly's fate seems certain. Enjoyed reading it, good use of rhyme and form.
Comment Written by sfharper on 02-Apr-2019

The Good Guy with a Gun by Stacia Ann

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The ending was rather indeterminate despite the good guy with a gun, you held the suspense really well. The poem is scary and unfortunately is often real for some, like the poor girl thinking she was being picked up by Uber. Good work.
Comment Written by sfharper on 02-Apr-2019

The Ghost of Bellamy Bridge--ch. 7 by Jannypan (Jan)
Chapter 7 of the book The Ghost of Bellamy Bridge

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What a kind hearted gift, the gift of peaceful sleep from Mama for a ghost. I like the natural dialogue and the way it goes from a sad thing to a happy event. Enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written by sfharper on 02-Apr-2019

Savior Archetype by HealingMuse

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Wow, first ever one word per line acrostic poem that I've read, that is very difficult to make meaningful, I think you accomplished it. The start is so appealing to go with the imagery. Thanks for all the historical background.
Comment Written by sfharper on 02-Apr-2019

Seasons by 24chas

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Good description of how writing can affect us, emotionally especially. Good use of planting material after the switch to loss at the end. Nice end breaks, enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written by sfharper on 23-Mar-2019

Is it pot luck? by Pearl Edwards

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I like the sense of passage that comes in this poem and the final twist at the end toward recognition of humanity between the generations of family and across societies. Good use of rhyme and internals but especially form. I almost want a few eyes up top. Enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written by sfharper on 23-Mar-2019


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