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Dollie Mason

My Hoary Home by Dean Kuch

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This is beautiful and well written as it describes something we all must one day face--death. I like the way you describe itand even though it makes chills go up my spine..still I enjoyed it.
Comment Written by Dollie Mason on 17-Jan-2017

Ratty Wolf by MoonWillow

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Wow I don't know what to say about this interesting reading and didn't see any editing errors enjoyed reading and look forward to reading your other works.
Comment Written by Dollie Mason on 17-Jan-2017

Ripples (Portia) by RGstar

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Very nicely written, I didn't see any editing errors. enjoyed reading it and it has a deep message. I look forward to reading your other works.
Comment Written by Dollie Mason on 17-Jan-2017

Promise by Mystic Angel 7777

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Wow this is very well written and has a tremendous message for anyone experiencing love for the first time or who is years into it. I'm a widow and had a few tears reading this. good job
Comment Written by Dollie Mason on 15-Jan-2017

Senseless Acts by Mystic Angel 7777

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I enjoyed it very much but didn't fully understand It at the beginning. I found it well written containing a positive message. Although, I am a new writer, I love to read something that makes me think. Keep it up.
Comment Written by Dollie Mason on 08-Jan-2017

Super Awesome by Keelan Cloud

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You are positively Super Awesome!!! Your positive writing is very uplifting. I enjoyed reading and look forward to reading more of your writing. Take care and have a great evening.
Comment Written by Dollie Mason on 07-Jan-2017

That Fine Hour Of True Stillness by Cranial Thinker

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Absolutely great writing I enjoyed it very much and would love to read more of your writings. I didn't see any editing needed. Hope you have a wonderful evening and keep up your writing.
Comment Written by Dollie Mason on 07-Jan-2017

Perhaps in the end by Hayley Solomon

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Very nicely written, although, I didn't fully understand it. Still I envy writers that can take words and make sense out of them. You have done a great job and I will read your work in the future. Perhaps I'm wrong, but I think you write with a deep meaning. Have a good evening and keep writing.
Comment Written by Dollie Mason on 07-Jan-2017
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Jealousy! by Commando

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I enjoyed your poem, I love any writing that changes me. This made me smile when I remembered my younger days. I enjoyed your writing. You have a great creative mind. Hope you have a good evening.
Comment Written by Dollie Mason on 07-Jan-2017
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Scarves and Rings by BeasPeas
Chapter 10 of the book Le Papillon Violet

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Your poem was interesting and I read the warnings so I can't fault you. I love your writing this is the first X rated I've read and its not dirty, just my mind (lol) "I love the painted toe nailed feet" . Have a good evening.
Comment Written by Dollie Mason on 07-Jan-2017


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