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Your boy by jenintorre

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Oh m,y Lord,l this truly touch home and at the right time
You captured my attention from the first line to the last Three young men in my family took the wrong path in life and was kill
another one on Labor Day or an argument
This killing each other Lord ,make it end.
Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written by misscookie on 10-Sep-2019
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End of Summer by Jannypan (Jan)

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The artwork you choose is perfect for your poem, they are a perfect match.
Your words are as bright as hues God created for all those beautiful flower's the grass and the trees.
Then soon the warmth slowly disappears letting us know fall season is near.
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Comment Written by misscookie on 09-Sep-2019
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The Flower Garden In Spring by Sandra du Plessis

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The artwork you choose is perfect for your poem, they are a perfect match.
Your words are as bright as hues god created for all those beautiful flower's the grass and the trees that bares fruit for all to eat.
Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written by misscookie on 09-Sep-2019

Betrayal Is by Gloria ....

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I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem, They are a perfect match
Your words captured my attention from the first line to the last .
Just like life we think we are strong until are hearts a broken into millions of pieces.
In time some how it is mend yet it will never be the same.
Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written by misscookie on 09-Sep-2019

The Cooperative Child by Michele Harber

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Not only did I love the title I love the poem
They are a perfect match.
You captured my attention from the first line to the last. In fact a few years I wrote a poem about something like this if I can find it I will post it. Thank you for sharing cookie
Comment Written by misscookie on 08-Sep-2019
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Daughter's Gone, Daughter's Gone by jaybird1

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Your words touched my heart and soul, from the first line to the last.
I could feel your love for her in line.
How bless you are to have that bound with her, many parents wish they had with their child or children
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Comment Written by misscookie on 07-Sep-2019

It's Just A Cell by Barb Hensongispsaca
Chapter 11 of the book 2019 part 4

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I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem, which is a perfect match.
Your words are so true and can be taking in so many ways.
This is what I call a food for thought write.
Thank you for sharing
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Comment Written by misscookie on 07-Sep-2019

Memory's Well-Worn Path by Mrs. KT

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I like the artwork you chose to go with your poem, they area perfect match.
The picture tells it all, I remember walking down path's like this which brought back happy thoughts through out my many years.
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Comment Written by misscookie on 07-Sep-2019

Chingada by Brett Matthew West

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I don't know if you this but my attention span is short. Due to my two strokes I can read maybe a half page of a story then forget what I readied. What I do remember of your story seems very interesting but if you asked me what I read . I can't tell you.
But by all means please keep the story going .
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Comment Written by misscookie on 07-Sep-2019

God's Son Jesus by Teri7

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I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem,And they are a perfect match
time I see this picture it seen to be talking to me, more so since my BB is gone
That is why I praise His Holy name for He is my suit of armor to keep me safe and strong.
Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written by misscookie on 07-Sep-2019


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