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Stigmata by 24chas

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Nice to see you back again, 24chas. This has all the trademarks of your writing. A real mix of light and dark, just like real life. It's nice that you're looking ahead to the future.
Comment Written by Marillion on 19-Dec-2019

Snickering Entendre (Free Verse) by Ms. Snyder

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Wow, this was so insightful, Ms. Snyder. The emotion in this one touched me, which is hard to do so kudos to you. Your poem is perfect for the contest so good luck.
Comment Written by Marillion on 19-Dec-2019

Don't Lie To Me by Ms. Snyder

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Hey Fonda, I had to jump in on this one. Dokken was my favorite group back in the big hair days of the 80s. I thought this was brilliant and the ending was perfect.
Comment Written by Marillion on 18-Nov-2019

Dean - gone but not forgotten by Ms. Snyder
Chapter 25 of the book Remembering Dean

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This is a very nicely written tribute to Dean, Ms. Snyder. He's an example of what fanstory should be with his generosity to new members and to old members as well.
Comment Written by Marillion on 09-Sep-2019

Poetically by 24chas

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Nice to read something from you again, Chas. Your trademark style is still effective and the words still beautiful and sensual. I love the ending of the poem.
Comment Written by Marillion on 14-Jul-2019

Breaking by 24chas

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The image of a one-room maze is brilliant, Chas. It boggles the mind to think of that and the ending is pure hurt and pain. This was a well-written piece of sadness.
Comment Written by Marillion on 14-Jun-2019

Voice by 24chas

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It's been a while, Chas. Glad to see you offering up your trademark short but says so much piece of poetry. It was very poetic and I'm sure whoever she is will love it.
Comment Written by Marillion on 09-Jun-2019

May 28 (Grieving in Pieces) by 24chas

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I know what you're referring to and I know the tragedy of it. Sad and unfortunate, and I know it's scarred you and you'll remember it forever. A very powerful poem.
Comment Written by Marillion on 28-May-2019

Away by 24chas

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This was psychedelic, Chas. I'm sure it's not about a drug trip, though it certainly could be. That's what I love about your poetry: the open-endedness of it where it could be about almost anything. Well done for the creative imagery alone.
Comment Written by Marillion on 24-May-2019

Keepsake by 24chas

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Another magical piece from your pen, Chas. I think you nailed exactly what a poet would be thinking as he sheds his mortal coil. Always curious and wanting to know everything. A true six.
Comment Written by Marillion on 21-May-2019


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