This is a very well written poem of wisdom and truths. Your rhyme, rhythm, and imagery is perfect. I very much enjoyed reading this poem. I also could see how the many choices made along my journey shaped my life.
yes, thank you and i appreciate your review. 'the choices made along your journey shaped your life' and many many others. The bends and curves you leave behind unbeknownst to you, create many more curves and bends for others they for others and so on....our connection. i am very happy you enjoy the rhythm of the rhyme with simply beautiful, not complicated words. i really try to make them provoke thought in everybody..
I love the poem and the butterfly. You did a beautiful job on both. I can relate to this poem because my love flew away many years ago and although he's not so far away; he's still gone. I think I've told you that you are a remarkable poet before, and I'll say it again. You are great!
I really enjoyed this rewrite of a popular song. You have a flair for storytelling, it is true. I read this poem because it stopped me when I saw the title. I love rocks and have collected them for years. Good luck in the contest.
Thank you, bayoupoet, for your generous, six star review. Yes, this rewrite of a popular song is a showstopper. I am glad you stopped by to review it. Thank you for wishing me good luck in the contest, too.
You have written a beautiful poem about writing poems and stories. We share moments of our lives and hope that it resonates with others. I can't think of a better way to spend my time as well. I enjoyed reading your poem.
You give us a very good account of the many dangers of war and the enemies bag of dirty tricks. I don't know anything about war except the things posted on the news. This doesn't seem quite fair if there is such a thing as fair in war. I really felt more enlightened after reading your poem.
This is many words of wisdom that I just read. So often people speak without thinking first or get involved with what they consider harmless gossip. They do not often consider who such words might hurt. Your poem should be up there with other words of wisdom.
This poem is a very beautiful, well written, and should reach the emotions within the hearts and souls of the faithful. This is a larger number of people than one might think. I found it to be inspiring.