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My Small Boat by tfawcus

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or is it what we fear to be, where we cannot see? or expect that life is just a fantasy? so many questions in ones mind, that sorrow overcomes the truth that none will be answered.

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Comment Written by Lulube on 13-Jul-2020
Dust's Seed by victortouche

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the giver who can help many through troubled times can have nothing left for themselves but appreciate themselves for the lives that are still living, for theirs is of no concern

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Comment Written by Lulube on 13-Jul-2020
Some are rich, some are poor... by royowen

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good points to make. Choice, change, coincidence, all need apply for our journey in life. Sometimes the fallen are just too far down to reach, even within themselves they know they have lost the will to carry on.

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Comment Written by Lulube on 13-Jul-2020
Wisdom 3 by Iza Deleanu
Chapter 2 of the book Wisdom

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you've brought about a lot of issues, but I must agree with the claim on multi personalities, for the most part being able to escape through another would be calming to say the least. Only thing is; what is in store upon returning into the picture again?

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Comment Written by Lulube on 13-Jul-2020
Seashore Serenity by Ronni

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tides, with a force that is uncontrollable, yet a survival act of nature. mesmerizing, tantalizing, fearful. my favorite lines; winds of rising tide achingly soul kissed, with no shore to claim. brilliant

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Comment Written by Lulube on 13-Jul-2020
beauty of nature by Gert sherwood

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this style is always tricky to be able to get across your message in so few words and in only 3 lines. Using the word yore, is brilliant! it says more than being one word. great penning

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Comment Written by Lulube on 13-Jul-2020
The Die Was Cast by Dorothy Farrell

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what a wonderful heartfelt poem. I feel a lot of admiration and I feel sad for the loss, especially when you said, Why can the past not last. (don't know if you should use - does)

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Comment Written by Lulube on 21-Jun-2020
The Gift of the Sea by Ricky1024
Chapter 12 of the book Beautiful Poetry from Long Beach Is

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There's something wrong on this one and a previous one for there is no text of your posting. I haven't been on here for a bit so I can't tell you of any earlier ones.

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Comment Written by Lulube on 21-Jun-2020
Cellophane Wrapped Screams! by Ricky1024
Chapter 12 of the book Cornavirus C-O-V-D-19 Pandemic Cris

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Time does fly by when older, The panic that sets in for knowing your years are on the decline. but in our youth we fear nothing and the final years are inconceivable. cellophane for screams within, love it

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Comment Written by Lulube on 21-Jun-2020
A Toast to My Dad the Plumber by Gert sherwood

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Quite the vivid memories, great imagery. You portrayed him as a happy go lucky kind of guy. Lots of respect. great rhyming although the last 3 lines would have been nice to have had a final rhyme in them. Here's to your dad!

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Comment Written by Lulube on 21-Jun-2020
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