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The Moon Crashed Down by Debra White
Chapter 5 of the book Picture This 2021

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no other way to describe the photo. and a beauty of a photo. make a nice lamp. the bunnies better not get to comfortable, your dog may sniff them out. lol

cute, fun

lulube
Comment Written by Lulube on 24-Feb-2021
Tree Huggers by JLR

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love your story, or should I say your report of this horrific accident and the scene you found yourself just missing being an active participant. I've lost a lot of friends that rode and I still want (bucket list) to get a trike. Old mamma on the 3 wheeler. lol hopefully before I'm too old to drive. lol good luck

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Comment Written by Lulube on 23-Feb-2021
Sense Memory by visionary1234

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I thought I'd look up some old friends to see if they were still on here. Yep you are. I wonder why I don't get notices of your work posted anymore? I take it you don't get my posts either? Well, your senryu is claiming the times. Well put and great photo as well.

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Comment Written by Lulube on 22-Feb-2021
The Word Present by country ranch writer

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Very good, Nice examples for the usage of the word present. It can be put to a lot of use. Go figure. English. How the now can turn into giving one a smile. only one oopsy, inpresent the president, change to - I present the president

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Comment Written by Lulube on 22-Feb-2021
Chasing Rabbits by Debra White
Chapter 3 of the book Potlatch 2021

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I bet she's a wonderful 4th kid in the family. It's amazing how they twitch and moan, even whimper in their sleep, I think the bunny dream is probably right. Good read.
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Comment Written by Lulube on 22-Feb-2021
Fun Filled Day by country ranch writer

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And a SOMO
This is so precise, well thought out. Nothing to correct, yeah Barb!! Yes, we are well on our way to days of glorious sunshine.
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Comment Written by Lulube on 22-Feb-2021
Senses by the Sea by Debra White
Chapter 2 of the book Haiku 2021

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terrific imagery, I like the "pebbles clatter", lets the force of the waves be known. Nice photo, looks like the beach that almost got me. no kidding.

lulube
Comment Written by Lulube on 22-Feb-2021
Life and the Sun by poetwatch

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Absolutely wonderful, spontaneous, rhyming, free verse. My niece lives in Austin but I haven't talked to her, so thxs for sharing your experience. Nice inline rhymes, great imagery, smooth read not choppy. I really enjoyed this.
I'm in BC know all about this snow

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Comment Written by Lulube on 22-Feb-2021
Reaching Out by mbagby23

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OMG you are not that down are you? You know how to write yourself out of these trying times, right? You are the master of your own thoughts. A good sobbing cry is a good way to start coming back. And find all that pleases you and put yourself in the middle of it all. You can rise above the dirt and bugs and smell the sweetness of the flowers and the warmth of the sun on your face. A long shower with Irish Spring soap does wonders for you loving yourself. ever want to chat, I'm here.
keep on, keepin on.

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Comment Written by Lulube on 22-Feb-2021
Having Fun with Words and Sounds by Gert sherwood

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Stan is a lucky man to have someone that can write down their emotions for him.
This is short and sweet and I like your use of Z. try that other one again, jot down words and then see which ones can be put together.

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Comment Written by Lulube on 21-Feb-2021
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