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As Lovers Do by easyeverett

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Vivid imagery of this old timers home, through the stormy times they are there for each other. Mind you the last image of them picking each others hair, kinda made me wince. As old lovers do, I guess

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Comment Written by Lulube on 22-Nov-2020

Stealing the Stars by Ricky1024
Chapter 9 of the book "Cup of Smiles"

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try try, till you succeed, even if in a dream. but it made his reality better, eh? Now what happens with the capture?
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Comment Written by Lulube on 22-Nov-2020

Sunset by AnnieDawn

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Great imagery, the sunsets are getting more vivid than ever before. How far up on the west coast are you talking about. I grew up around Vancouver BC. but i;'ve been up the coast to Prince Rupert, fishing. great sunsets being on a boat.

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Comment Written by Lulube on 22-Nov-2020

Kisses by AnnieDawn

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I now can agree with the last verse for the best kisses. never knew how a grand child could make you feel. I never got that feeling that I was so special, maybe back then grand parents shied away from grand kids.but that was then and I have my own to be given those slobbered kisses from

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Comment Written by Lulube on 22-Nov-2020

Norwegian Traditions by AnnieDawn

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So interesting, my mom's Norwegian. Her last name was Larson. lol I went to Oslo when I visited my daughter in England 4 years ago. No one in my family had gone there so I went to tell my mom about it. I was quite comfortable being there. I wished I had more time to go to the place where Lars had taken on Larson as his name. it was south, near the coast. There is still a standing farm house on property and I think there is a through road on it now.

lulube missed the cooking though, my gramma was French-English with a hint of Indian.
Comment Written by Lulube on 22-Nov-2020

Being Human by Janice Canerdy

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Terrific points noted. and in your notes, try to practise what you preach, Ditto, I say, If you are going to bitch at someone for doing or not doing something, you had better make sure you don't do the bitch. Keep yourself in check, then you can stand tall when you bitch. lol shouldn't have to though.

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Comment Written by Lulube on 22-Nov-2020

What is Best Dreams or Reality by Gert sherwood

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I could have sworn I sent you a review on this one, but I'll say it again. I better get my dreams up and running again. Can't remember the last time I dreamt. think my pills hinder them.

lulube got me listening
Comment Written by Lulube on 22-Nov-2020

Are We Stingy with Graciousness by Janice Canerdy

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My attitude is at the point that I'm going to say yes, reject. You're given the respect, you give it back or you just told a pretty bad part of you to all around you. No one with values is going to give you a second chance, well, but me, but I'm not going to see the good buried in another any more, just let them all go, that's my new motto. lol

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Comment Written by Lulube on 18-Nov-2020

Depression by AnnieDawn

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been fighting ptsd and depression most of my life. Yes writing definitely helps, but not when there's no pen and paper around. common sense has no ruling over depression, it over rides what you know and brings on the mixed emotions even stronger. I have been on Citalopram 40mg, what it does is balance out the chemicals in your head (lets say) so you can function without slipping so low down you don't want to see the day. no affect on how you feel as normal, no sleepiness, no hangover effect, no speediness, you don't know how messed up you are until you miss a few days. I cry in an instant, everything breaks my heart. It's fine to try a different attitude to deal with how you see your feelings but hey, you dont have the recipe for the chemical balance, Citalopram will balance you. Give yourself a break ask your Dr. tell him what I told you

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Comment Written by Lulube on 17-Nov-2020

Workers and Shirkers by Janice Canerdy

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Only 2 lines and I'm taking them 2 different ways. Clever! That topic has been passed around in my surroundings as of late. I have a different word for shirkers, that is if I have that right, cause I've never heard that word before. mine is a bit more profound dog-f***ers. hope that doesn't offend you. I am just knowing you

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Comment Written by Lulube on 17-Nov-2020


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