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The Case of the FanStory Phantom by judiverse

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This is some mystery. I've been on and off this site and on again since 2011, I think. I've never seen a ghost review. Could it be possible that the reviewer puts a dot so many characters at the end? So the body looks empty? I love your investigative mind that helps create some memorable articles.
Comment Written by forestport12 on 17-Apr-2021

Jazirat Al Hamra, UAE by robyn corum
Chapter 10 of the book ABC Haunted Places of the World

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I learn so much just by reading the defining of key words or places. Such a haunting picture, but you managed to capture words and place them there that gave the picture a powerful and memorable feel. I so want to go there.
Comment Written by forestport12 on 11-Apr-2021

Hawkins To The Rescue by Mastery
Chapter 42 of the book The Deceivers

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"A steady drizzle continued as he drove towards his office on Welles. He merged into heavy traffic on interstate 94 with the beams of his headlights glistening on the wet pavement. A long string of red tail lights glowed in a bumper to bumper parade for miles ahead." I think it takes confidence to write fluid descriptions. I usually try to feed off your confidence, so in my writing I try not to rush an important description like this. Stan (Stosh)
Comment Written by forestport12 on 11-Apr-2021

Heaven's Star by MissMerri

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Love the way you finished it with a testimony of a heart for the Lord, a heart like a star that shines and reflects the creator! Love the image you brought into my mind of that glassy lake and the wonderous reflections.
Comment Written by forestport12 on 08-Apr-2021

Female warrior by Ben Colder
Chapter 2 of the book Desert Flower

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"She's a woman ain't she? And I hope I never find out." Realistic dialogue. Chuck full of historical information with just the right touch of dramatization. Blessings around the bend. Listen for the hiss of an arrow or the ping of a bullet.
Comment Written by forestport12 on 08-Apr-2021

Stolen Cattle by Ben Colder
Chapter 1 of the book Desert Flower

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I heard those Comanches were a tough breed. I'd have my head on a swivel and my revolver in one hand. I love the picture and the words. I could visualize this and feel the tension going into the open. Very realistic, as always. And worthy of six stars as a strong entry.
Comment Written by forestport12 on 05-Apr-2021

Bisbee's Copper Queen Hotel by robyn corum
Chapter 2 of the book ABC Haunted Places of the World

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Now you got me wanting to check it out. I always thought I'd just bring a Bible just in case and claim the blood of Christ if I feel an ice pick in my spine. Love your tastes.
Comment Written by forestport12 on 02-Apr-2021

We Need A Money Tree by Robert Zimmerman

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Looks like budget balancers like Rand Paul and others will soon be in the Smithsonian museum along with other prehistoric creatures. Just print the money, and Biden says, C'mon man!
Comment Written by forestport12 on 02-Apr-2021

Looking Back on 1989 by BethShelby
Chapter 111 of the book Remembering Yesterday

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I was disappointed you couldn't see Jerry Lee Lewis. I've always thought the personal touch to refer to your husband in the memoire lifts the story and emboldens you to make it more passionate. What I like most is how there's enough faith to get through the trials. It is encouraging to read your story. Blessings.
Comment Written by forestport12 on 28-Mar-2021

Is it a Good Thing? by lancellot

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This reminded me a little of Breaking Bad, when the kid gets all excited and says, "No, I won! I won!" And the father tries to get him back to earth. Very realistic and it takes talent to read a script and or stage script and just be absorbed by it. Nicely done.
Comment Written by forestport12 on 28-Mar-2021


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