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Why God No Kill The Devil? by Deniz22

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Very important aspect as to free will central to understanding how God allowed certain things. I like where you went with it. Robinson the book, I had heard was written by a Christian. Keep up the good Word and work. Very informative.
Comment Written by forestport12 on 11-Dec-2019

Purpose by Ben Colder

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Sometimes simplicity works Ben. It is meaningful and timely. When I think of the word good, it brings to mind many things. And as you know there the good in creation and the creator and makes poetry more than a few words.
Comment Written by forestport12 on 10-Dec-2019

Curse of the Blue States by Robert Zimmerman

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Interesting take on how important a symbol red is to us. Like the contrast how when you are oxygen deprived you turn blue. I breath easier knowing My blood runs red. Does that make me a redneck? LOL
Comment Written by forestport12 on 09-Dec-2019

LIfe-altering Obstacles by Mistydawn
Chapter 4 of the book Nowhere to Hide

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I can think of many reasons you deserve six stars. Simplicity with strong verbs are one way that make this story chapter appealing and worthy. Simple but sensory example, like using a short sentence to describe her crunching and shaking in the seat or biting her lip with fear. a reader cringes and feels those things in the character, as the reader becomes one here. I'm not sure, but I think your writing has seriously improved or might not be confused with someone else. Keep writing! Such a joy to write positive review and be honest at the same time.
Comment Written by forestport12 on 05-Dec-2019

Life With A Pastor by LisaMay

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Oh my goodness. I wanted to laugh out loud but then held my mouth and wondered if I should. I looked around and found I was alone in my thoughts, but I so love how you incorporated those word switches with a spiritual context. nice fun job!
Comment Written by forestport12 on 05-Dec-2019

The Right Choice by Janilou
Chapter 34 of the book Jirvania

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Love the way you frame your dialogue and keep it active and lively. Your dialogue really advances the plot and keeps you in the moment getting the reader to get caught up in the story. You have the gift.
Comment Written by forestport12 on 01-Dec-2019

If Only ... by MissMerri

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Oh Miss Merry what a TREAT to read your poetry. Glad I stopped by. You are my favorite. It is a matter of perspective, isn't it? The bee does need television, or a super long life. The bee lives his purpose and to do so is fulfilling more so than those who are humans, lost and without purpose. So much the bees give us to think about. And so much does God teach us through nature. Please do something special for me. Please write a poem that details the wonder of how bees can fly but aren't supposed to, and science has no answer. Just like science has no answer for how the miracle of water sustains us!
Comment Written by forestport12 on 01-Dec-2019

Mount Fuji by rspoet

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Love, love, love how you said so much with so little. The way you describe this event makes the mind imagine it and puts you there. good luck. I'm not a great judge of poetry. But I know what I like and what I love.
Comment Written by forestport12 on 01-Dec-2019

Life Lessons at My Father's Side by LisaMay

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I'd have to tell you Lisa, I fell from a tree, after our gang kids left me there. I ran home crying. I recall how my mother told me my eye was kind hanging. She pushed it back in and bandaged me up. I grew up in your generation and the smells as well as the sights I recall are strong with me. I appreciate how family mattered. And it doesn't have to be a modern time to make life better, we do so with love for our family that never goes out of style. Love the details about your Dad.
Comment Written by forestport12 on 01-Dec-2019

Strange Changes by robyn corum

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Love the last lines. It made all the difference. It lingers with you. It's wonderful how you've found yourself prolific with humorous poetry but the kind that makes a person think deeply about something important.
Comment Written by forestport12 on 01-Dec-2019


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