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Sweet Money, part one by Ideasaregems-Dawn

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Hi Dawn! Looks like the beginning of a very good story. Short, but certainly held my interest from beginning to end & waiting for Part two! Good work girl- Betty
Comment Written by seewhatimwritingnow on 02-Mar-2014

Wendy's vs. The Baldwins by EMB
Chapter 1 of the book Memorable Moments

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Lol- Good for you! Crazy that we actually have to ASK for ketchup and salt these days (remember when they dumped about 30 in the bag? Really enjoyed this read. Thanks Edward! Betty
Comment Written by seewhatimwritingnow on 23-Jun-2013

senryu (my in-laws' wedding gift) by MAMONIA

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Not a thing normally thought to give as a gift- but certainly one to last forever. This was also a gift from me to my daughter..who is very much alive. Thanks for sharing. Great Senryu! Betty
Comment Written by seewhatimwritingnow on 21-May-2013

ANZAC Parade by Lovinia

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Beautifully written tribute to those who fought and died in WWI. A powerful message that will touch the hearts of many. Good luck in the contest. Betty
Comment Written by seewhatimwritingnow on 21-May-2013

my daughter's love by Lise Deangelo

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Lovely poem of a daughter who is no longer there- who has left precious memories. Well written, lovely form. I enjoyed this. Best of luck in the contest. Betty
Comment Written by seewhatimwritingnow on 21-May-2013

Why Writers Fight and Bicker by EMB

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LOL- guess you named them all, Edward! I believe they have all reviewed me at one time or another. Just love it when someone asks me to remove an 'unnecessary' word. LOL I'm never sure if we're on here to share our thoughts in our own original way, or if we are to be perfectionists and Editors? Personally, I like to be rated for my originality and what my story or poem has to offer. If any of them ever go for publication- THEN they will be edited. Thanks for sharing this- really enjoyed the 'truth' in it. Well done! Betty
Comment Written by seewhatimwritingnow on 30-Apr-2013

One day at a time by Sam Mendonca

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No matter what solution you choose- you WILL get through, one day at a time, that's all we can ever hope for, unless we are able to make changes on our own somehow. Faith in prayer is good sometimes, but not always a cure. Thanks for sharing. Betty
Comment Written by seewhatimwritingnow on 18-Apr-2013

Good Friends by God's Writer

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Very nice spiritual message. Well written and presented. Many will find themselves in this writing. Thank you so much for sharing this. Betty
Comment Written by seewhatimwritingnow on 18-Apr-2013

Brothers by Just2Write
Chapter 7 of the book Blessed is the Fragile Heart

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Sad to say, more now than ever, guns DO belong in our cars, homes, churches and schools. So many homes and schools being broken into and people being killed- seems like everyday, on the news. Thank God, we CAN have these weapons to protect ourselves. Who would walk into a war unarmed? With so many drug addicts and jobless people in America today- they are desperate and will rob and kill to get what they need. Also with so many suffering from mental illness and no way to get medical help, we are at their mercy. Yes, in today's world it's only common sense to be armed, or to at LEAST have a gun in your home. Enjoyed the read, thanks for sharing. Betty
Comment Written by seewhatimwritingnow on 18-Apr-2013

Ebay by lorijean

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LOL- You sound like me- an Ebayer! I've been selling on there for 13 years. Can't sell that broken heart, huh? Just put your picture on there and tell em YOU go with it- You'll sell it in a New York minute!! Love this poem- very cute idea. Thanks for sharing, Lorijean! Betty
Comment Written by seewhatimwritingnow on 18-Apr-2013


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