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< Hate-Speech > by Nanette Mary

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Very important Naani poetry screaming out for help to change what this cruelty is doing to our people and earth. Are you from South Africa yourself?. Not that I don't believe you or like to see pain, cruelty and suffering, but I would like to see your evidence, to be able to continue this work. I have a poem in here called "Lioness" which is about a woman from CapeTown that I know and about how she was working as an journalist under the apartheid. The other day was a documentary about Nelson Mandela showed here in Denmark and it is terrible to see how the majority of black still lives. We need to change it, and we need to do it now!. I will work on this with your help Nanette Mary!

Inspired by your poem I just posted an Acrostic called "South Africa". I hope you will read and comment on it. Please let me know what you think should be done.
Comment Written by AnetteAurora on 02-Jan-2011

A Thought Expressed by Trybuck

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Very sweet little poem that I enjoyed reading. The artwork is very sweet too. My favorite line is

giving each seeker
More than they sought

I believe you could say a little more....
Comment Written by AnetteAurora on 02-Jan-2011

Shadow by esfandiar

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Kind of funny way to write this. I like a lot the story behind the iron boots which I think you should explain in the author notes, so it makes more sense to us who didn't know. I really enjoyed her big nose, contra her perfect reflection.
Comment Written by AnetteAurora on 02-Jan-2011

Scent of the evening call by sweetsilversong

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Wouu I really like how you make us all see the world through these very special eyes of the female creature. Very lovely and different which I love!
Comment Written by AnetteAurora on 02-Jan-2011

Sonnets From the Soul: XVIII by mountainwriter49
Chapter 18 of the book Sonnets From the Soul

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Very very beautifully description of a very personal and honest way to speak of past and wished for the future. I enjoyed reading this a lot!
Comment Written by AnetteAurora on 02-Jan-2011

~ In A World Of Their Own ~ by Nanette Mary

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Beautifully well described, how we all will live with secrets so heavy of love, that no one else than us selfs know if we are there alone with it or not. I prefer to believe that those persons will get a second chance to meet again in a new life!
Comment Written by AnetteAurora on 02-Jan-2011

New Year's Toast by adewpearl

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Again just beautifully written, though your english is so much better than mine, that I have to learn new words every time I read some of your work. This is a good thing because you keep it so simple and so smooth and soft, with perfect rhymes all the way.
I live in Denmark and in danish we have the same idiom...in case you want to have a laugh, this is the way we say it in dansih "Der er ingen grund til at gr¦de over spildt m¦lk". So now you know Danish too, and you teach me so many new good words, thanks for that!!
Comment Written by AnetteAurora on 02-Jan-2011

The Falling Star by adewpearl

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Beautiful poetry as always Brooke and it makes me think about how it came to be something that everyone in the world do. Makes wishes when they see a shooting star. I like how you made a spontaneous wish as you saw that one shooting star...antoher thing in common is never to tell anyone of that wish!. It makes it a very universal poem!
Comment Written by AnetteAurora on 02-Jan-2011

A New Years Poem for Harley by Mustang Patty
Chapter 29 of the book Pet Stories

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Very cute little poem with nice rhymes and flow all the way through. So happy for your puppy that he have ended up in your home and hands and cool name, by the way!!! Happy New Year!!
Comment Written by AnetteAurora on 02-Jan-2011

New Year Wishes by Kathryn Varuzza
Chapter 25 of the book Poetic Ponderings

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Great little poem that I enjoyed reading. The sound is nice and makes it easy reading. Happy New Year and hope that strength will make wishes come true!!!
Comment Written by AnetteAurora on 02-Jan-2011


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