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Always There by Pearl Edwards

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Not sure of the form of this poem and that is not important. The closing verse ... very meaningful. Had me sitting back in my chair for 20 minutes or so, Read this 4 times ,,, got better with each read. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written by Halfree on 25-Oct-2020

Crossing Over by humpwhistle

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You have no shame and I welcome that. Enjoyed the posting and think Eddie a wise man. But he might be sitting in limbo waiting for somebody to hit send. Well, anyway I got a chuckle.
Comment Written by Halfree on 25-Oct-2020

A Transport of Delight by tfawcus

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Well I must this one is probably one of your best. Read a lot of your posting, like most. This one was very well done,message clear and sound. Did enjoy the read.
Comment Written by Halfree on 24-Oct-2020

Butting Heads by humpwhistle

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Little odd, at first. Set aside and promised myself to read later. Read it again and the damn thing made perfect sense or perhaps I am a little odd. Whatever the case, I enjoyed it on the third read and on the 4th read. Some good work here, enjoyed it and like.
Comment Written by Halfree on 20-Oct-2020

Scents upon the air by Pearl Edwards

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Took me three reads to really appreciate this poem....do not ask why... just did. The first verse really came to life on the second read... good writing there. Enjoyed the poem, it is late and the house quiet. A good way to close my day ... nice poem.
Comment Written by Halfree on 19-Oct-2020

Twenty Rejections by judiverse

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Solid five..... well done and fun to read. The closing line says it all. Glad I read this-little jewelKeep[ at it, you have a fan....me.
Comment Written by Halfree on 14-Oct-2020

Wisdom of a Time Lord by lancellot

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This is very good and thought provoking ...and the painting added to it. While your poem was of 13 words, it said a lot. Good work .... very well done.
Comment Written by Halfree on 11-Oct-2020

Thoughts of friends by Pearl Edwards

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Do not know all the poetic forms... do not really need to. Read your poem three times .... enjoyed each read. I do not know what FS does with a brief revue...sometimes they tell me my reviews are too short. What more can be said .... read it and liked it and I am glad I took a few minutes to read it.
Comment Written by Halfree on 11-Oct-2020

Rae the Fixer -- Part 1 by humpwhistle

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Well done...the dialogue carried the story and set the time and place. Thought the story flowed well and very believable. Some good writing going on here ,held my attention. Will keep reading ... Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written by Halfree on 11-Oct-2020

Crestfallen Angel by humpwhistle

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Delightful posting ,,,,liked the last 4 lines ...pretty much says it all. Second verse says it all... anyway, enjoyed the read.
Comment Written by Halfree on 01-Oct-2020


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