Hitch..These are my favorite lines and reviews of them;
When her soul sailed to eternity
My despair was a raging sea.
Pain quickly turned to anger
As why, laid waste to me.
You opened the work up with the soul sailing to eternity...this is a beautiful visual to my mind
I like the line as why, laid waste to me...it stood as no service to you for no explanation could be fathomed for the loss you felt
I felt the desire for release in the end...which is to catch up with the soul that awaits you in eternity, eternal peace...the tie-in.
This was another of your great pieces, that I enjoyed very much in analysis and the perfect combination of words used to bring your Nonet to a beautiful crescendo....good luck in the contest...an excellent contender....FREE-ONE
Comment Written by FREE-ONE on 17-Jul-2012