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Shirley McLain

AmaZing Animals - L by sandramitchell
Chapter 12 of the book AmaZing Animals

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It's a six and just hidden at this time. You did a great job as always. I learned a few things about the Lemur. I had no idea about that second tongue. Have a great Monday. Shirley
Comment Written by Shirley McLain on 15-Jun-2020

Forsaken Lover's Rune by Y. M. Roger

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A beautiful poem of love. I think I like the second verse most of all. You did a great job without any errors that I can see. Have a great Monday and a fantastic week. Shirley
Comment Written by Shirley McLain on 15-Jun-2020

Ode to Junk Food by davisr (Rhonda)

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I enjoyed reading your odd to junk food and it was mouth watering to read about Hostess and candies. You did a great job. I didn't find any errors. Great job. Shirley
Comment Written by Shirley McLain on 14-Jun-2020

St. Louis Chapter 30 part 1 by barbara.wilkey
Chapter 70 of the book St Louis

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What an exciting chapter, my friend. I'm so glad that Mac was found alive, not that I really doubted it:) That five is actually a six. I'm sure you can tell that now that I've told you. Have a great Sunday evening. Shirley
Comment Written by Shirley McLain on 14-Jun-2020

Double Blind~Chapter Ten by Sally Law
Chapter 10 of the book Double Blind

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An excellent chapter to read. I like the tension and the action going through it. I didn't find any mistakes as I read through. Have yourself a great Sunday evening. Shirley
Comment Written by Shirley McLain on 14-Jun-2020

Part two-Not One Tear by Ben Colder
Chapter 19 of the book A Grain Of Wheat

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A wonderful chapter, Ben. I enjoyed reading it and I didn't find any errors, as usual. I'm wondering if JB and Lottie are going to get involved. Have a great Sunday evening. Shirley
Comment Written by Shirley McLain on 14-Jun-2020

The Lovers by Mastery
Chapter 1 of the book The Deceivers

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Here's you six stars for your great chapter. I could really do some man-bashing here but I will keep quiet. You did a wonderful job and I didn't find any mistakes. Have a great Sunday evening my friend. Shirley
Comment Written by Shirley McLain on 14-Jun-2020

Mountain Vistas by Pam (respa)

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Have you been to the Tetons? When I lived in Wyoming I would drive to Yellowstone. The morning sun made the Tetons pink. I think it was one of the most beautiful sights I've seen. You did a great job. I didn't find any errors. Have a great Sunday. Shirley
Comment Written by Shirley McLain on 14-Jun-2020

A Shiver of Sharks by tfawcus

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So sharks swim in shivers instead of schools. Your poem is excellent and even a touch scary with them going after their pound of flesh. You did a great job. Have a wonderful Sunday. Shirley
Comment Written by Shirley McLain on 14-Jun-2020

Wool Gathering by Loren
Chapter 3 of the book Life in Avondale With Ida and Cora

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I loved the dog showing up with that unmistakable wet dog smell. Did you grow up in Oklahoma? Where are you located? If you don't want to answer, it's ok. You did a great job as usual. Looking forward to the next installment. Have a great Sunday. Shirley
Comment Written by Shirley McLain on 14-Jun-2020


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