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Shirley McLain

I Don't Know Clouds by Maria Jose Garcia

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Young people that have to mutilate themselves for relieving from their anxiety is a sad thing. I didn't see any mistakes in your storey. Have a great day. Shirley
Comment Written by Shirley McLain on 11-May-2019

Dust by LG Wolfe

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Are you writing about termites in a tree? I've read it a couple of times and that seems to be what I pick up. You did a good job. I didn't see anything to recommend to you. Have a great day. Shirley
Comment Written by Shirley McLain on 11-May-2019

Battle of Cape Longo part two by F. Wehr3

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Very good chapter. Full of action which kept me reading to find out what would happen next. Dialogue is great. You did an excellent job. Shirley
Comment Written by Shirley McLain on 11-May-2019

Slip by Debra White

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very poignant poem and so sad. Words do hurt even when they come out differently than what you meant to say. Your poem is smooth and easy to understand. I saw no errors. Have a great day. Shirley
Comment Written by Shirley McLain on 11-May-2019

Living Vicariously by Ideasaregems-Dawn

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We've had a couple of very brave young men the past couple of weeks who gave their lives to stop a schoolroom shooter. I'm sure your show was heart rendering. You did a great job. Shirley
Comment Written by Shirley McLain on 11-May-2019

Minute by giraffmang

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Yes, language is wonderful. if you're talented you can do almost anything with it as you certainly are. I like your teeny, tiny itsy-bitsy poem. You did a great job. Shirley
Comment Written by Shirley McLain on 11-May-2019

Dear Mr. Kennedy by Maria Jose Garcia

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liked this story a lot. It sounds like a letter from a little boy. I didn't see any mistakes. You did an excellent job and if I had a six I would give you one. Have a great evening. Shirley
Comment Written by Shirley McLain on 11-May-2019

Today by giraffmang
Chapter 19 of the book Anthology

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What a wonderful story. Your description of the man's emotions in words let you feel what was happening. I like the ending when his son is in his arms. It was as if he were rescued for a time. Great job. Shirley
Comment Written by Shirley McLain on 11-May-2019

Life Form by Lordinajamjar

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Congratulations my friend on your newest Grandchild. I'm going to have my 4th Great in September. My Granddaughter is so excited, this is her first. You did an excellent job on your poem and certainly easy to read and understand. Have a good evening. Shirley
Comment Written by Shirley McLain on 09-May-2019

Can life really be good? by His Grayness

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A very nice little story that I enjoyed reading. You did a good job. I didn't see anything to make recommendations about. Have a wonderful afternoon. Shirley
Comment Written by Shirley McLain on 09-May-2019


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