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I am a Rare Gem by jjstar

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Very well written and interesting. I like the story and am anxious for the next part. Don't see any spag.

Thanks for a great read.
Comment Written by Ducorse on 07-Nov-2013

Chapter 56 From the Realm Beyond by joneau2
Chapter 56 of the book From The Realm Beyond

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Well done. I enjoyed this. A couple of suggestions:

along with a letter describing that(how) Billy employed the knife...

Sarah, and Alligator John, and(as well as) Stan's final exploits.

Thanks for a great read.
Comment Written by Ducorse on 07-Nov-2013

Asters by catch22

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Very well done. I love the flow and imagery of this work, especially the next to last stanza. The occasional rhymes really hold it together.

Thanks for a great read.
Comment Written by Ducorse on 07-Nov-2013

Church Bells by n.rosej.

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Well done, we should all follow those bells. The flow of this reminds me of a Christmas song in a way, maybe it's the bells but especially in the first verse I get that Christmas feeling.

Thanks for a great read.
Comment Written by Ducorse on 07-Nov-2013

In Exultation by adewpearl

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Yes indeed. Short and to the point, I like this. If only we could all be as good at this sort of exultation as the young.

Thanks for a great read.
Comment Written by Ducorse on 07-Nov-2013

The Ripper and the Pumpkin by ravenblack

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Very very nice. A rare read. I enjoyed it very much especially:

idiot pumpkin
subject to my razor whims

best of luck in the contest.

Thanks for a great read.
Comment Written by Ducorse on 25-Oct-2013

The Mustache Tree by n.rosej.

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Very well done. Good job getting it all to rhyme so well. The story is interesting and has the flavor of a children's book. I can almost see the illustrations when I read it.

Thanks for a wonderful read.
Comment Written by Ducorse on 25-Oct-2013

In Hiding by Cry the Vile Rebel

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Very well written and interesting. I particularly like the ironic jubilation, I win. I win. It has the flavor of the monster stabbing himself with emotional knives. Best of luck in the contest.

Thanks for a great read.
Comment Written by Ducorse on 25-Oct-2013
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Still Broken by cinderbella
Chapter 21 of the book Take: Two

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Another great chapter, well written and engaging. I didn't see any typos it seems well polished.

Thanks for a great read
Comment Written by Ducorse on 20-Oct-2013

Homeless by ravenblack

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Well done. I really enjoyed this, it evokes a feeling of tired desperation, almost resignation. I particularly like stanza four.

Thanks for a great read.
Comment Written by Ducorse on 09-Oct-2013


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