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Now I Lay Me by justmarly

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Well done. A very nice balance of grim humor, sadness, and anger. Nice flow and good rhymes. I enjoyed this very much.

Thanks for a great read.
Comment Written by Ducorse on 07-Oct-2013

Homeless Child by sweetwoodjax

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Short and to the point, just as the contest demands. The image you chose works well with it. Well done, best of luck in the contest.

Thanks for a great read.
Comment Written by Ducorse on 07-Oct-2013
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Bella Bounces Back! by cinderbella
Chapter 18 of the book Take: Two

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Another great chapter, I really liked this one. Well written and error free as far as I can tell.

Thanks for another great read.
Comment Written by Ducorse on 07-Oct-2013

Chapter 69 New Orders from Houston by Norbanus
Chapter 69 of the book WITH BOWIE AT THE ALAMO

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Another great chapter, well written and engaging. I like the description of the wampum, very interesting.


Thanks for a great read.
Comment Written by Ducorse on 07-Oct-2013

A Road Trip With Aunt Pearl by Cajungirl

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A great story, well written, funny and a little painful. I've ridden with far too many Aunt Pearl's in my day as well. Good luck in the contest.

Thanks for a great read.
Comment Written by Ducorse on 07-Oct-2013
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Swimming in the Ocean by denhagan

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Well done, I really enjoyed this. The rhythm of the poem is reminiscent of waves crashing on the beach.

Thanks for a great read.
Comment Written by Ducorse on 07-Oct-2013

The Dark City by Alexia350
Chapter 9 of the book Dark shades of evil

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A good chapter. Interesting with good pacing. I enjoyed it.

A few suggestions:

---"Dear, boy, we are going to use it to camouflage ourselves in it.

I suggest that you remove 'in it'. Also do not think the comma between dear and boy is needed.

---It is capable of hiding us all in it.

Suggest you remove 'in it'.

---One of use (us) will be in the front to see where we are going; I suggest that person be Magda."

Thanks for a great read.
Comment Written by Ducorse on 04-Oct-2013

The Holy Bible - A Good Read by PerkPerkins

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Well written and also good advice. My wife has a similar proverb, and I haven't found hers either.

Thanks for the recommendation and the great read.
Comment Written by Ducorse on 02-Oct-2013

roaring sea---lune (5-3-5) by elainec4

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Very nice. The word crescendo even seems to boom like a wave hitting the rocks. Well done. Best of luck in the contest.

Thanks for a great read.
Comment Written by Ducorse on 02-Oct-2013
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

More by adewpearl

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Once again, wonderfully done. A smooth easy read with a very compelling moral lesson and enough humor mixed in with the wisdom to take the edge off. I enjoyed this very much.

Thanks for another great read.
Comment Written by Ducorse on 02-Oct-2013


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