My Comments

Excellent

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This was such an enjoyable read. I can not wait for days like this. Right now, as I look out of window, it is rainy and cold. This made me feel warm and content. Damn you for making me feel that and wanting more of it!! Just kidding! But seriously, this is a really good poem!

Comment Written by Jackreese on 19-Feb-2018
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Harbor of Hades by Dean Kuch

Exceptional

This work has reached the exceptional level

This, truly, is an amazing piece! I love the artwork and the music that goes with it! I felt the sorrow and pain through my senses because of it! Wonderfully written and wonderfully displayed!

Comment Written by Jackreese on 19-Feb-2018

Panacea for Snake Bites by Lloyd T. Okoko

Excellent

That was pretty interesting and the picture that accompanies the piece makes it real easy to visualize. If only such a leaf existed it could be marketed and save hundreds of lives.

Comment Written by Jackreese on 19-Feb-2018

The House That Jack Built by Jannypan (Jan)
Chapter 2 of the book Animal Friends

Excellent

These guys are a hoot the back and forth between them had me looking at my animals and thinking I could see them arguing over everything and anything. Thanks for sharing and giving me something to laugh at.

Comment Written by Jackreese on 18-Feb-2018

haiku (raven presents) by IndianaIrish

Exceptional

This really deserves the six I gave. This goes unbelievably well with the artwork! I am not usually a fan of poetry. I actually read this only because I knew what a haiku was. I remember that from High School! Great Job!

Comment Written by Jackreese on 18-Feb-2018

More Than a Friend by Ashlie Daza

Excellent

Very good piece. Your poem is so right. What we look for in lovers we usually already have in friends. I would have given you a six but I don't have any left! Good luck with the contest!

Comment Written by Jackreese on 18-Feb-2018

Run for Your Life by Mistydawn
Chapter 1 of the book Town Slayer

Excellent

This really was a well-written chapter! Such violence. This story really pulled me in right away. There is only one mistake that I saw and it's very minor. In the second section you begin with 'Three Berryville Detective...' Shouldn't Detective be pluralized? Just a thought. Still, very well written!

Comment Written by Jackreese on 18-Feb-2018

Desert by The kurlman

Good

I am truly sorry that I was only able to give this four stars. The reason being, you titled this "Dessert" as in a treat after dinner. I really don't know if that was intentional, but it left me confused.

Comment Written by Jackreese on 17-Feb-2018
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

``````````Come Home to Jesus Christ` by Harry Smith

Excellent

I thought you did a really good job with this piece. I didn't feel that this became preachy, which is a good thing. I have come across many pieces that have come across as preaching to the reader. Good job!

Comment Written by Jackreese on 17-Feb-2018
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

We are Water by SunDazeDead

Excellent

This a really good piece. The imagery it produced was great. I really enjoyed the verse that started with "Horizon keeps a frown..." I was able to 'see' it and was amazed! I usually don't care for poetry, but I thought this piece was really good. Keep it up!

Comment Written by Jackreese on 17-Feb-2018