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Mary Ann MCPhedran

For Oct -Sunday's Thought by misscookie

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A well written story and has no need for edits or changes. I enjoyed reading your Sunday thoughts. your message is loud and clear and I hope you have many more.
Comment Written by Mary Ann MCPhedran on 08-Oct-2017

A taste of bitter snow by RGstar

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Hi this is good but I hate snow and when it falls on the ground it looks so pretty. I hibernate when it snows, and delegate all my family to do my errand's. Keep writing.

Comment Written by Mary Ann MCPhedran on 08-Oct-2017

Epilogue - The Unattended Reunion by Fridayauthor
Chapter 68 of the book LEAVING PINE HILL

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A well written story and needs no edit . Thanks for sharing with me. I lost rents in my early childhood. I don't remember my mother. WELL done. A great story with great imagery
Comment Written by Mary Ann MCPhedran on 07-Oct-2017
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Everybody Run for Your Life by Liberty Justice

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Well done this isa good tribute to the latest tragedy shooting in America. The World seems to be very rebellious these days and I don't know when we last had peace. Well done.
Comment Written by Mary Ann MCPhedran on 07-Oct-2017

A witch named Sue Peek by rjuselius

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Very funny poem, can you imagine the scene I enjoyed reading the poem. First sight of the tittle I had to read I love this time of the year; I loved Halloween. A job well done.
Comment Written by Mary Ann MCPhedran on 07-Oct-2017
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Questions That Need To Be Answered by c_lucas

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Yes Charlie I agree, and my story/poem of hurricane Michael is a poem from a prompt on another site and I don't live in the USA so I wrote the only one bad storm in 1968. I feel for all the people who suffered under your last one. Our weather is much milder or different. Take care Charlie. Mary.
Comment Written by Mary Ann MCPhedran on 04-Oct-2017

Knowledge of God Part 1 by Sandra du Plessis
Chapter 7 of the book Walk with God in Faith

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Thanks for sharing with me your well written story/poem I was drawn to your poem and was interested and read on to the end. The words are inspiring and your spiritual message is clear. Mary.
Comment Written by Mary Ann MCPhedran on 04-Oct-2017
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Success And Contentment by Margaret Snowdon
Chapter 32 of the book In The Shadow of Love

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Hi Margaret, What can I say about your story as always so well written and with confidence and expression. You write well and the imagery as well as the descriptive story is excellent. Mary
Comment Written by Mary Ann MCPhedran on 04-Oct-2017

The Message - (Part Two) by Margaret Snowdon
Chapter 29 of the book In The Shadow of Love

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A good and interesting chapter. and a joy to like your style of writing and could never get bored with any of your stories.
Thank you for sharing. Mary Ann.
Comment Written by Mary Ann MCPhedran on 21-Sep-2017

Haiku ( stars gleam like diamonds ) by Mrs Happy Poet

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T enjoyed your poem and I think it is well written and meets the criteria. I'm not very good at haiku poems but I like your choice of written poem. Mary Ann.
Comment Written by Mary Ann MCPhedran on 21-Sep-2017


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