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Punkyboo52

Sensual Travels by FourByFour
Chapter 3 of the book Emotional Journeys-A Collection

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Wow, seriously, goosebumps. I never knew you felt that way about me sweetie, but it's nice you can let it all out on "paper" (winking at you). I really love this one, it's going in my book of favorite poems and quotes. It's truly beautiful. keep it coming!
Comment Written by Punkyboo52 on 16-Nov-2004

Girls' Night Out by FourByFour

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Hmm, this sounds all too familiar and made me laugh as you always seem to make me do. I love that I am able to read it through but that I need to grab the dictionary just to make SURE I understand the words properly, I'm always looking to improve my vocabulary. Louse: parasitic insect...perfect!Until next Saturday...cheers!
Comment Written by Punkyboo52 on 16-Nov-2004

Dreams by JenH1976
Chapter 3 of the book Breaking Away

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I like it, slightly confused as to what it means to you, but I am able to aply it to my own situations as well. Then again, maybe that's the point, the character speaking, seems to know what she wants but it's a contradiction of herself...aren't we all? I like the ending especially, don't change it!
Comment Written by Punkyboo52 on 10-Apr-2004

The Therapist by FourByFour
Chapter 2 of the book Addictions

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I've decided I don't like the therapist-in a good way, don't worry. I like her character, I like how she says her name all the time like she's trying to train a puppy or something, Julia-sit. I think you should try to fill the "hour" with generalizing what went on or soemthing because it was like she stated her problem then it was over, just a little thing but it was something I thought about while reading it anyway.
Comment Written by Punkyboo52 on 23-Feb-2004

The Meeting by FourByFour
Chapter 1 of the book Addictions

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You crack me up...and I'm relating WAY too well to the character. I like that the character is comical in her realizations but I think it would be interesting if it took her a while longer to figure out that it's not sex but love that she is addicted to. In a lot of books (i have noticed) the author lets you figure it out before it is said, either with experiences or whatever. But I don't know what is going to happen this is only the first chapter and the story may only be beginning! Ok, I'm curious what advice the therapist has to give me I mean her. Good job so far Jen.
Comment Written by Punkyboo52 on 23-Feb-2004


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