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Large Marge by Meia (MESAYERS)

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This has perfect limerick humor and the rhyme and rhythym are perfect. The picture you chose is perfect... they look like my panties... Ha Ha
Comment Written by RYME4U on 25-Feb-2017

Spring Teaser by Bobbi22

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Very good alliteration here. I like your choice of words and the way you have presented this Alliterusen poem.The rhyming and rhythm are good, also
Comment Written by RYME4U on 19-Feb-2017
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Green Feet by HarryT

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I like the rhyme and rhythm of the poem and the green feet subject is clever but I don't see alliteration in each line, The rhyming names are cute but not all lines have a t least two words starting with same letter,Good job , though,
Comment Written by RYME4U on 18-Feb-2017
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The Great Blue Yonder... by Margaret Snowdon
Chapter 251 of the book First Aid for the Soul

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This Happy poem is beautifully done, It rhymes well and is presented well, too. the imagery is very well descrubed and the rhythm is smooth and even, sounds lovely to me,. good luck in contest,
Comment Written by RYME4U on 18-Feb-2017
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Light by jaded831

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This is a nice poem with a happy and uplifting message.The free verse is well done and the chosen words you.ve used have set up a very loving image, Good job1
Comment Written by RYME4U on 18-Feb-2017
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Unexpected Happiness by Rlegel99

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This poem set up a happy scene ...A Christmas visit from son to mother. It tells a story within a story, the rhythm is good, you have doe well with this contest entry,
Comment Written by RYME4U on 18-Feb-2017
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Setting Sun by robyn corum

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This poem was delightful to read, Most of us need to "stop and smell the roses:The rhyme and rhythm are perfect and the descriptive phrases show lots of imagery. WEll done!
Comment Written by RYME4U on 18-Feb-2017
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seven sisters by judester

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This poem was a delight to read. Very informative and the use of imagery and metaphors is excellent. You chose the perfect matching artwork, too. Great job!
Comment Written by RYME4U on 17-Feb-2017
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To Post or Not to Post by June Sargent

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This is a pondering poem.The alliterations are good and it rhymes well, I like that you pose questions throughout.A clever and original idea and a darling picture to match, Good job
Comment Written by RYME4U on 16-Feb-2017
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Sacred Souls by angel123

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This is well done and offers excellent insight into what faith and love can do, the rhymes and alliteration are blended well into the spiritual meaning you aimed for, Good job
Comment Written by RYME4U on 16-Feb-2017
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