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Robin Moynihan

So Sad by Belinda

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This is a beautifully told, but sad, account of the aging mind! The last stanza is very scary, but really make one think! :o} robin
Comment Written by Robin Moynihan on 24-Jan-2011

Personal Information Display (PID) by R. K. Alan
Chapter 1 of the book Return to Earth - Tech Review

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I love the PID but I'm with him on this one:"Is continuous monitoring and tracking a good idea? I wondered about ulterior motives." especially with the military's signal scanners! As we have seen throughout history it is sci-fy authors with over-active imaginations that have given us some of our greatest tech-no-toys! This sounds like you've had fun writing it! :o} robin
Comment Written by Robin Moynihan on 24-Jan-2011

Robert Burns by alexgardiner

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A wonderful tribute to a wonderful master, made only better by the hearing of it read by yurself! I love yur accent, it is very pleasing to my ear!
Comment Written by Robin Moynihan on 24-Jan-2011

What Would He Say by dale steeves

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Very nice rhyming of your couplets! the flow is very melodic making it an easy and pleasant read. You handled this contest entry well, best wishes!
Comment Written by Robin Moynihan on 24-Jan-2011

Where Dreams Forever Dance by anabellapongasi

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A wonderful picture of happy dreams dancing...(I guess nightmares could dance too, but that would be scary)! I want to go to the place "where dreams forever dance", your rhymes are wonderful and melodic!
Comment Written by Robin Moynihan on 24-Jan-2011

sunset by adewpearl

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I enjoyed your treatment of this pantoum and your beautiful
description of a sunset, a beautiful woman not wanting the party to end!
:o}robin
Comment Written by Robin Moynihan on 24-Jan-2011

How Unique & Wondrous You Are! by sizemore0409

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I love your pensive questions,
which are each followed by the
heartfelt statements that
"seeks to know".
Still holds melody tho it's free!
Comment Written by Robin Moynihan on 24-Jan-2011

A New Day by katz meow

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I enjoyed your free verse poem.
Especially the second stanza:
"my mind and soul
find passage on
beautiful paths"

I love to take walks and this is how I feel! Thank you!
Comment Written by Robin Moynihan on 24-Jan-2011

The Billion-Piece Jigsaw Puzzle by sizemore0409

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A nice job putting this poetic puzzle together.
Being a puzzle enthusiast, I truly enjoyed this!
I also enjoyed you author notes of your
favorite things! So true, so true!
Comment Written by Robin Moynihan on 24-Jan-2011

God is Love by Perp Ihebom

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How very well you brought
out the idol worship humans
are so prone to accept. Nicely done!
"Oh that men would dump unfeeling gods
And embrace Love, the light of life
For God is love
And love is life"
Comment Written by Robin Moynihan on 24-Jan-2011


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