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If by barkingdog

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Hi Ellen, beautifully written whilst keeping to the 1-5-7 rules. Nicely presented in shades of blue on black. Original and eye catching. Good luck with the contest. ~Mel~
Comment Written by write hand blue on 23-Sep-2019

Jasmine by barkingdog

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Hi Ellen. Hope you are in good health and it's nice to see your post.
Poor old/young Jasmine, great story that draws you into the situation. I like the play on 'I am nothing without you,' and the finale, 'I am nothing.' This gives that last clue of the plot; that necessary surprise that forms the end of the story. The very best of luck in the contest. ~Mel~
Comment Written by write hand blue on 19-Aug-2019

11th May 2019 by Sallyo
Chapter 194 of the book 2019

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Hello Sallyo, writing about everyday sights shows an inventive mind. I like the subject, Bougainvilla is a favourite of mine. An unusual presentation from Tasmania. Thank you for sharing. ~Mel~
Comment Written by write hand blue on 11-May-2019

If by giraffmang

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A good selection of words designed to capture the attention of the reader and the writer.

Displayed with white text on black background. Nothing to divert the attention from the words.

A good contest entry. ~Mel~
Comment Written by write hand blue on 03-May-2019

Punished Posthumously by judiverse

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I find it unbelievable that a person can be so blind and extreme that they would remove a statue, I mean who took the decision? Who is deciding these things? Political correctness is not world wide yet, though we are suffering from it in my country, where it is being taken to daft limits. These things go in cycles the sooner we reduce the influence of this, the better.
Your account of Kate Smith's life was interesting and informative...~Mel~
Comment Written by write hand blue on 24-Apr-2019

Beware... by robyn corum

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I'm reviewing this because I've just finished recently reading about a real life hit man. He sometimes used steel as they describe knives. A favoured method was to push the blade into the spine and push upwards. Less messy that slitting the throat.
Gruesome, I agree and all the worst for being true.

A dark presentation to match the subject. You surprised me with this subject. Well written and worthy of comment. ~Mel~
Comment Written by write hand blue on 08-Feb-2019

It's Time by giraffmang
Prologue of the book It's Time

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Nicely written, a small part of a story that holds the reader in suspense. We are left wondering what the freezers and transformers are for. I wondered if he was going to electrocute himself... but then there are those freezers,

A story that piques the interest. ~Mel~
Comment Written by write hand blue on 08-Feb-2019

Thinking of Michael's Legacy by lyenochka
Chapter 16 of the book Our Friend Michael Cahill

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A lovely poem expressing your feelings for the sadly departed Michael Cahill. I always had time for his work, I found so original and entertaining. Thank you for sharing your poem with us. ~Mel~
Comment Written by write hand blue on 06-Feb-2019

Waking to the Dream by michaelcahill

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This is so sad, your dream revealed. You were one of the first writers that I noticed on the site. Your work was always so fresh and original. I wish to express my condolences to the family of Michael Cahill. Sadly missed.

Melvyn Lumb
Comment Written by write hand blue on 06-Feb-2019

Rosie the Runaway Horse by Miss Sherry

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Hi Sherry, I read with interest about Rosie your horse. My sister has two horses and I enjoy going for short rides occasionally. I also used to get up early when we had the farm, many moons ago. A good, enjoyable and interesting story.

~Mel~
Comment Written by write hand blue on 25-Jan-2019


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