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Entering The First Chamber by sandramitchell
Chapter 9 of the book Eric's Epic Adventures Bk 3

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Hi Sandra, only took me two days to read it...but I couldn't wait anymore..LOL...I had a feeling something could go wrong and they would be stuck in there...well!!! at least they have food for a while...and clothes...hmmmmm...made me laugh wjen Eric was sucking the blood off his finger...if you think about it...he could be the last to survive...I hope Noah doesn't cut himself...and now Eric is shutting the door...OH NO...really a great chapter you...will he...or won't he...
very well written my wonderful friend...I sooooo love the story told sweet girl...bunches and bunches of Love to ya...Linda xxoo

Comment Written by l.raven on 23-Jan-2020

Oh, Mummy! by sandramitchell
Chapter 8 of the book Eric's Epic Adventures Bk 3

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Hi Sandra, I thought this was to be a safe trip...
now we run into Jimmy Dean the sausage man....not sure if you've ever heard of Jimmy Dean sausage...it's pretty good stuff...even Noah's knees are shaking...good thing for Gizmo...you think Graham could make me one for the hood of my car ???...might come in handy...

so lets see if Noah can get the clue right...they need to keep an eye on him...they could end up at Dinosaur World...so off they go...

I loved reading this beautiful girl...had me laughing...can't wait for the next chapter...
and no...I didn't see any nits...veryyyyyyy well written my wonderful sweet friend...love you to bunches...God Bless...Linda xxoo

say hi to Ian for me...xxoo love
Comment Written by l.raven on 14-Jan-2020

Secrets by alf collier

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very beautifully written...I love your
wording....in whispered secrets...love your poem...
and love the picture....good luck in the contest...
love Linda xxoo
Comment Written by l.raven on 13-Jan-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Remembering Phyllis by lyenochka
Chapter 2 of the book Saying Goodbye to Phyllis

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Hi Helen, like you my sweet friend...Phyllis told me not long ago she was dying...I knew she was sick...but I knew it for awhile...I am glad she is at peace now...no longer suffering...but so heartbroken she is gone...she will be so missed by so many...she was a brilliant writers...and I loved her penguin poems...she made me smile...we may not meet in this lifetime Helen...but we will in the next one...Phyllis is now in FanStory heaven...with a lot of talented company...my prayers are with her family and friends...she is now at peace...I love your poem sweet girl...and your picture so touching...tears...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written by l.raven on 10-Jan-2020

May your heart be my pillow by DR DIP

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Hi Waves, NONE of your love poem have ever been silly...
romantic, sensual, heartfelt, and caring...but never silly...I have always loved your love poems...because they came from your heart...true feelings...and this one is no different...I love your poem...very well written...and I love the picture my friend...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written by l.raven on 10-Jan-2020

Goodbye is Not Always Easy by Teri7
Chapter 6 of the book Saying Goodbye to Phyllis

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Hi Teri, like you I have been crying sense I heard Phyllis passed...she will truly be so missed...I loved reading her penguin poems...Penny, Petey, Papa, Patty, and Mama...she made me smile...she helped so many on here...and was a wonderful friend to all...I believe this my wonderful sweet friend...we may not meet in this lifetime...but we are going to meet in heaven...there is a special place for our FanStory family to meet...what an amazing reunion that will be...she is now meeting all our FanStory family passed in heaven...thank you for sharing your heart angel...she is now at peace with God...love you...Linda xxoo...thank you for being such a wonderful friend...
Comment Written by l.raven on 10-Jan-2020

Evolving Consciousness by rama devi

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Hi Rama Devi, life's toughest challenges are our great gifts...they are what we learn wisdom from...our GPS to get us through life...very well written my sweet friend...with a true message sweet girl...love you...good luck in the contest...Linda xxoo
Comment Written by l.raven on 10-Jan-2020

Rock Bottom by Dolly'sPoems

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HI Dolly, so good to see you sweet girl...I believe in most addictions...you have to hit rock bottom before you see the light...you have to find your worth...sigh...I love your poem my sweet friend...and love your picture...very well done...and very well written...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written by l.raven on 10-Jan-2020

Sandwiched Into History by Joan E.

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HI Joan, when I was reading this...it reminded me of Helen...she is amazing at writing this poems...and you my sweet friend did a wonderful job...your poem has a rhythm to it...kind of smooths along...and I love the wording...very well written you...and your picture is stunning sweet girl...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written by l.raven on 10-Jan-2020

Goodbye, Dear Phyllis by Sally Law
Chapter 8 of the book Saying Goodbye to Phyllis

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HI Sally, I am in tears my sweet friend...I knew Phyllis had been sick for awhile...and am relieved she is now out of pain...she is now resting in peace...she will be so very missed...I truly believe Sally we will all meet again in FanStory heaven...what a reunion that will be...we may not meet in this lifetime...but we will in the next...she was an amazing writer...and a wonderful friend... I loved her penguin family...Penny, Petey, Papa, Patty, and Mama...she made me smile...sigh...I am heartbroken...my heart goes out to her family and friends...they will be in my prayers sweet girl...I know she will love this picture...God Bless...love you angel...Linda xxoo
Comment Written by l.raven on 10-Jan-2020


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