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Rain is Falling by adewpearl

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Absolutely lovely rhythm to this poem, you can feel the rain mounting up and you progess thorough the beautiful description of nature and the Wizards, welcoming the rain. Beautiful storytelling throughout, enjoyable for both young and old alike xxCrunchie.
Comment Written by Crunchie on 25-Aug-2014

Cancer by MoIronE13

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God was not in the raging Tempest, but heard in the still, small voice.
The voice of the poet,
The voice of the spirit,
the courage of the writer to share,
And the humility he allowed to enter his being.
Be blessed each moment by faith dear friend as you stand in his glorious presence.
Your soul cannot be touched as it is soaked in a dearer wine.
Love Crunchie xxx
Comment Written by Crunchie on 27-Apr-2014

Insomniac by ravenblack

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Oh my the sheep sleep just flys by..
Love this quirky fun poem,
Admiradley described to us insomniacs.
I Lika your style of form too
Baa ram ewe, to your breed be true xxx
Comment Written by Crunchie on 22-Apr-2014

Where does Cruelty come from? by MoIronE13

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This rhetorical question, I cannot answer,
but this I know, what we give to the world, we receive back in abundance, whether it be love or hate.

This is a powerful poem full of unanswerable questions that has the reader asking themselves the questions you pose.

Fear,
Arrogance,
Retribution, are the seeds of dis sease and destruction.

Take heart my friend for you are numbered among the Soothsayer's and Healers in this beautiful Universe and
Grandmother Earth loves you with a ferocity all her own.

Love Crunchie XXX
Comment Written by Crunchie on 24-Mar-2014

In Love by MoIronE13

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I love your love poem Mahina
The beautiful statements ring so true
You create in words such joy and tenderness with your lover.
She is one lucky lady!
God bless
Crunchie xxx
Comment Written by Crunchie on 04-Feb-2014

Shaman 5 by Erik McGinley

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Great introduction to meditation here Erik,
I admire your simple but attention to detail approach.
I practice Mindfulness and have recently got into Lucid Dreaming a little. Reiki Healing is an energy that I treat myself and my horses and dogs with. This brings a deep sense of oneness and well-being with the universe for me.

Easy to follow and potentially enlightening piece of writing.

Love
Crunchie XX
Comment Written by Crunchie on 18-Jan-2014

Shaman 4 by Erik McGinley

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Physical expression and being grounded on the Earth is so important as you say and spending time in nature with my horses everyday is the way I connect to the real world. It is also very hard work caring for them which adds to my overall fitness and brings me a sense of well-being.
I have tried Trance Dance which I really loved, time to let go and simply express through body language.

Nice follow on Erik and I'm pleased you added the precautions for beginning exercise, this tells me you are a compassionate soul.

Love
Crunchie XXX
Comment Written by Crunchie on 18-Jan-2014

Cardinal's Gift by Mrs. KT

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Mrs KT
You write beautifully about this wondrous little bird restoring your faith to you on a cold day by his presence.

A lovely uplifting poem thank you for sharing.
Love
Crunchie xxx
Comment Written by Crunchie on 17-Jan-2014

Trusting by l.raven

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Exquisitely beautiful sentiments move the reader to feel the spontaneous wonder of love between these two sensitive souls.

Uplifting and mystical in its simplicity.

Thanks for sharing
Love
Crunchie xxx
Comment Written by Crunchie on 17-Jan-2014

Maureen's Salad by His Grayness

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Oh Lord Grayness
What a delectable salad you toss
It was definitely Maureens loss
She could'nt eat another bite
Cos His Lordship's salad glows in the night!
Next time Maureen graces your table
Enable a catering well worn fable
'The dog ran away tossed salad in jaws
Take my arm and McDonalds towards'
We march......

Ho ho ho love your sense of humour
Great poem
Full of fun xxxxx
Love Crunchie xxx
Comment Written by Crunchie on 17-Jan-2014


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