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Just one step away by JLR

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Great Job on this JLR... Perfection:

We live, we grow, we stumble, we fumble,
Knowing full well, at the very end,
just one step away ...
a new life will begin!


Comment Written by Artasylum on 28-Jun-2019

To All Things I Adore by easyeverett

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easy... sometimes it is more fun to be not right in the brain... bad behavior gets a past... Love this and always look forward to your poems... yours, di
Comment Written by Artasylum on 28-Jun-2019

haiku (autumn mist rises) by Mystic Angel 7777

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Hey Mystic Angel... wonderful job on your 15 syllable poetry contest... wo much to say in so few words... the imagery is beautiful too... looking forward... thanks, di
Comment Written by Artasylum on 28-Jun-2019

A View of Venus by Cindy Warren

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I love the upbeat feel of this verse...

I see them as much friendlier sorts
Around a volcano toasting smores
Maybe dancing and singing while building forts
In case ash and lava pours.
Comment Written by Artasylum on 28-Jun-2019
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Forlorn Thorn by Mystic Angel 7777

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This is an excellent entry for the 10 word poem... great job and well said in such an economy of words... Good luck in your contest and looking forward. di
Comment Written by Artasylum on 28-Jun-2019
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

The Leary Trip by humpwhistle

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Congratulations humpwhistle on your first pace win in the sentence start a story. I love how clever this is and most unexpected... looking forward... yours, Diana
Comment Written by Artasylum on 28-Jun-2019

Biblical Conditions by easyeverett

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We are chasing out tails and claiming progress but instead we are peddling backwards... two steps forwards and five steps back... as always terrific... yours, Diana
Comment Written by Artasylum on 27-Jun-2019

Note to Self? by Alcreator Litt Dear

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I think of all of the stuff I've read from your pen Alcreator... I love the call/response form you have used here... thanks so much for the fun read. yours, dana
Comment Written by Artasylum on 27-Jun-2019

Clarify Me God's Words by Alcreator Litt Dear

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Hey Alcreator Litt Dear... Good luck in yourn Acrostic Free Verse Poem Contest. Thanks so much for a unique and interesting point of view and read... your, di
Comment Written by Artasylum on 27-Jun-2019

Faith in facts by Josh Walters

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Well stated Josh... I love the analytical approach to your exploration of our spirituality... this is a very good entry for the Faith Poetry Contest... looking forward. yours, di
Comment Written by Artasylum on 25-Jun-2019


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