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Fandango by closetpoetjester

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That was frickin awesome...I mean it P Dit...really really good...I rush through mine...half assed like, and think...meh! that's good enough for the gals I run with...then I read something like this and resolve to put the time and effort in...so very well written...you da bomb
Comment Written by charlyann on 21-Dec-2013

Humps Vs Trunks by closetpoetjester

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Super duper babe...you are one funny chick...too bad it takes 2 weeks to fly to Australia from here...I'd love to have a beer with you
Comment Written by charlyann on 18-Dec-2013

Black Hole (M1) by poesyapprentice

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hi baby, long time no yakk...you're still writing from your gut...good job on this...describes inner turmoil so well in so few words...well done pal...nice to see you again
Comment Written by charlyann on 09-Dec-2013

Dancing Delicious by visionary1234

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Very lovely indeed...nice smooth read, rolls off the tongue ...pretty imagery,the second stanza and the last line of this poem really stand out to me...well written
Comment Written by charlyann on 08-Dec-2013

Wanderlost by wanderlost

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Amazing and beautiful, you must be new, I don't recolonize your name...but you sure can write a poem my friend...it flows gracefully the rhyming is spot on...reads like a song..very pretty..second last stanza is my favourite...muted fear :)...great job on this
Comment Written by charlyann on 08-Dec-2013

Monster Mom by Tatarka2

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Just perfect, usually when I get up around the top ten or so...I roll my eyes, but not this one...the heart of a mother, with the talent of flowery ease...so very well written, I hope your kids have a copy...I wish I wrote this line..."Because you live your life in the practice of what I preach."...example isn't part of raising a child...it's everything...great job on this
Comment Written by charlyann on 08-Dec-2013

Advancing by closetpoetjester

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ahhh shit I love this one...holy moly woman you can write a poem...it cracked me up..I've long since given up on on-line dating because of all the knuckleheads mulling about...this was really good hahahaha
Comment Written by charlyann on 04-Dec-2013

Dishing the Dirt by closetpoetjester

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Hey sexy...I logged back on today to see if my account was still active...great poem as usual, you witty doll you..love from snowy canada
Comment Written by charlyann on 04-Dec-2013

Puppy Dog by SimplyaStudent

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A very cute nonet, the adorable picture really adds to the feel, I like that you added a rhyme into the poem also..very nicely done, good job
Comment Written by charlyann on 04-Dec-2013

Instant Love by Devon Phipps

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Lovely poem..great imagery, pretty much sums up the giddy, confusing journey of falling in love, very pretty and nicely done.
Comment Written by charlyann on 04-Dec-2013


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